All Comments on 'Just Desserts'

by randibyrnes

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hoo_hoo_boohoo_hoo_booabout 11 years ago

Most enjoyable. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
5*****

Thank you from another old guy. tom anon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Enjoyed it!

Very nice, erotic and beautiful. Gives an older man hope.

horney47horney47about 11 years ago
Nicely done!

Enjoyed that very much. Very romantic and erotic. Please write more! And thanks for this one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Very well written. Exciting and fun!! Great read! :)

litereader54litereader54about 11 years ago
OMG

Finally a writer on LitE that is LITERATE. Thank You for putting forth the effort to publish. I'll have to check out your other stories on LitE & the Kindle story. Fantastic Story. Old guys rule!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
good, good lov'in...

I have an "old guy" and he is beyond fabulous! Would not trade him for two youngsters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Nice but needs work

A nice story, but the numerous typos are a distraction. The ending seemed rather abrupt to me.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassabout 11 years ago
Wow

A great mystery story--can we figure how an old guy can still get it up without Viagra? Just kidding--I loved the plot and the story. Your description of Julia's arousal is one of the best I've read.

Good luck in the Valentine's Day contest.

SoleBrotherJeffSoleBrotherJeffabout 11 years ago
Begging for a second chapter

Great character build-up. We really got to know them before the sex. However, at this point, we seem to know a lot more about James, than we do Julia.

Perhaps the next chapter can delve even deeper.

This is a great love story & a geat sex story too.

Now I have to read all your other postings.

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!

Your heart & mind are in the right place. PLEASE CONTINUE !!!

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
still smiling

does this remind anyone else

"I wondered why you weren't wearing read,"

of the Title of another story

Words on Skin ????

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I guess this means that there is still hope for ME to find my daddy issues girlfriend!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Dear arbdibyrnes:

This is a great story andI say :thank you" for writing abut Juia and James.

i

Excellent very evocative sex and also great cooking, art and other information.

I am grateful

Appreciative in Ontario

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Thank you for the comments, hope to submit more often in the coming months. Sorry, I don't send out pictures. Thanks for reading and voting. Randi