All Comments on 'Enjoying the Drive Ch. 02'

how stupid can their parents be they cant smell her or tell when she cums 5 inches from her

Can't wait till they get get to the hotel.

The parents are clueless! Gotta love that! LOL

I once pulled off some similar moves with my girlfriend back in HS. Her mom and stepdad were up front, and we were all the way in the back "so we could hear the music without interrupting their conversation" by having them fade it all to the rear. The music made great cover while I fingered her while chatting with her and occasionally responded to her mom! So I know how plausible this storyline is, and I am loving every chapter. Keep it coming Edharian!

I'm a big fan of this theme!

Loving this story so far! Kinda disappointed that this chapter was so short :(

Was hoping Dani would sit back down on her brother's lap and slide his dick into her, and then just use her pussy muscles and the road vibrations and bouncing over the road to get them both off.

Hope to see chapter 3 soon!

ps- For the critics.

Most mini vans have rear windows that open to vent. This would eliminate most of the smell.

Also, if the middle seat is a bench seat, it would be impossible for the driver or front seat passenger to be able to see what is going on behind it.

Never read anything so bad

this is a good story keep writing could be longer but good all the same.

Great. Keep up the flow.

Keep up the excellent work! More more more!!!

I'm enjoying the banter in their relationship almost as much as their playing with each other, haha. My only issue is that the chapters need to be longer. Other than that, keep it up, it's great stuff so far!

less than a single page,

and it is supposed to be a chapter? it's not even a complete thought.

Too all the whiners: This is a FANTASY!!!

And a great one.

It would be great if, say, the mom fell asleep, and the daughter was leaning through the middle talking to her dad

Then the brother could pull her shorts down and play with her.

The father would then start to smell his daughters pussy and decide to play with her tits as he drives.

She could also lean right over and jerk her father off during all this.

All while the momma is asleep.

Still a good premise.

Still lacks eroticism in its telling. Just saying "They fucked" (not that that's precisely what you did) is not erotic. Reading a shopping list isn't erotic either.

Two stars.

Won't read further chapters.