All Comments on 'Hawaiian Punched Ch. 02'

I'm glad there are some who've enjoyed this story. Chapter 3 is quite a bit longer, and will be, in my opinion, quite a bit hotter as well.

I liked this chapter, please don't keep us waiting too long for the next one :)

For not having Benny speak pidgin english. Might want to disallow anon comments on this. LW woman haters feel like they own any story with a wife in it . They'll flame like mad and with "real malice" =intent to do harm. Liked the way Lisa got over her horror. Got a feeling there's a blowjob and more in store for her husband. Keep going.

I'm really enjoying the story. Great setup, great pace. Keep it up.

To the spoils go the victor. And Lisa is enjoying the privilege of spoiling Valerie. I loved the character development with insights such as Lisa's waitressing experience and her cleaning strategies. I love the fact that the delivery man enjoyed the show of her cleaning the ceiling fans. I just love what you are doing with the story and with the characters. I sincerely hope chapter 03 will be posted soon.

Hints from Heloise just wrote a dirty story, and I loved it. I keep thinking about this story. I even stood on my bed to reach my ceiling fan and see how exposed I was. I loved "...in the careful way of a nude woman carrying a steaming cup of coffee..." and the whole "box" conversation made me laugh, then learning that the delivery guy had seen her before she came to the door. Also liked the transition from the 1st chapter and how the dust bunnies kind of foreshadowed this one. Chapter 3 in a hurry, please.

Great chapter two. Now for the rest. Good writing style. ↕