All Comments on 'The Young Woman Next Door'

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melsdadmelsdadabout 11 years ago
Great story

Don't take any notice of the critical comments, some people don't know how to fantasise because they lack imagination, I was with you all the way, thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

GOD! Thank you :) :) I got off to this so many times.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
orrible grammar

Chronic spellings errors and grammar made it tough to read

PenKnave193PenKnave193about 2 years ago

It started out nice and sweet, but I was totally turned off when he became a thermonuclear asshole!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Excellent! Loved every second,

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