Forbidden Fruit

*****

Five.

Is this a stand alone?

I liked it, please continue.

That was right sexy, so please continue,

nicely done :-)

this was an enjoyable read ... very nicely done :-)

This was great, loved it!

doesn't the truck need some more repairs??

Awesome

I think you need more repairs done also!!!!

Great Story

Good job. I liked the dialogue, it was believable and realistic, and flowed very nicely. Keep writing, you'll be a powerhouse with time.

Cute story

Next time make him seem less submissive...or was he just going along for the ride?

Awesome

Loved everything about it - this from a white guy married to (and crazy about) a black woman. Forbidden fruit is so much sweeter... :)

Soft and Urgent

I found this a lovely little romance. I think it was kind of nice that he was the shy one. Hope he gets his act together, but you will never be shy. You brought back some fond memories of a slightly different version of forbidden fruit.
You should take the truck in at least for a tire rotation.
I'll be looking for more.

Sweet

What a sweet story!

Beautiful Memories

I was in my twenties and she was 11 years older than me. We met during church related activities and hung around socially which progressed to long phone calls then to phone sex. Then came our first meeting together outside in the woods that came right up to her backyard. Over a year we spent as lovers with many additional wooded trysts as well as in my car (VW van), at her home when other family members were away, in my barracks room, and other locations that have faded in memory of events 40 years ago with my Forbidden Fruit, Linda. Thank you for your good memories inducing story. 5* -Lejeau (my Lit ID)