The story deserves critical acclaim but I'm having a difficult time trying to give Susan her just deserts for the great story and character development, an interesting plot line, it is certainly erotic, yet up until now the story is so dark it is a little like enduring a difficult birth .While knowing great things await us from the remarkable story development it is hard to ignore the pain.
I felt the exasperation as the story continued to build and unfold as much as Rachel would have done as she waited anxiously to experience the incestuous lust of her father and brother. You kept me on the edge of my seat Susan. Marvelous moments of masturbation by all incestuous degenerates which now includes beautiful Rachel. The incest is sizzling hot, i love it. This chapter made me so wet. Another gripping phase in this fabulous story of incestuous lust. I am enjoying it immensely. This continuing story reminds me constantly of how much i love incest.
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The story deserves critical acclaim but I'm having a difficult time trying to give Susan her just deserts for the great story and character development, an interesting plot line, it is certainly erotic, yet up until now the story is so dark it is a little like enduring a difficult birth .While knowing great things await us from the remarkable story development it is hard to ignore the pain.
Born Beautiful, Rachel's Story #16
I felt the exasperation as the story continued to build and unfold as much as Rachel would have done as she waited anxiously to experience the incestuous lust of her father and brother. You kept me on the edge of my seat Susan. Marvelous moments of masturbation by all incestuous degenerates which now includes beautiful Rachel. The incest is sizzling hot, i love it. This chapter made me so wet. Another gripping phase in this fabulous story of incestuous lust. I am enjoying it immensely. This continuing story reminds me constantly of how much i love incest.
Thank you for sharing this chapter Susan.
Yours sincerely, Arwon
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