All Comments on 'The Addict'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

I'm not sure whether to feel sorry for "her" or to pity "her" for "consenting to rape"

That being said: your descriptive language is very good. You portray the feelings of "her" addiction. It was almost a frightening scene.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
She's a sex addict.

Rough sex, unpleasant as it may be, is not even close to reluctance, much less non-con.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

It wasn't a turnon. I relate to it too much.

But it was so, so good. Chilling. I know those feelings. It seemed so real.

You should submit some sort of short story somewhere. Not necessarily erotica. There's just so much more to the girl.

ForsakenliteroticaForsakenliteroticaabout 11 years ago
very nice

I can't wait to read more from you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Your friend...

4 years ...guess who...

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