by LilianaMarieUnicorns
I'm not sure whether to feel sorry for "her" or to pity "her" for "consenting to rape"
That being said: your descriptive language is very good. You portray the feelings of "her" addiction. It was almost a frightening scene.
Rough sex, unpleasant as it may be, is not even close to reluctance, much less non-con.
It wasn't a turnon. I relate to it too much.
But it was so, so good. Chilling. I know those feelings. It seemed so real.
You should submit some sort of short story somewhere. Not necessarily erotica. There's just so much more to the girl.