All Comments on 'From Our Ashes Ch. 01'

looking forward to the next installment. Good first post.

i would like it longer or have it come out often * * * * *

good story so far just wish it was longer

i hope you keep it up its a very good start

I REQUIRE MORE!!! ...If that's not to much trouble...

Please give us (the readers) more very soon.

Please continue.....

MOre, MOre, MOre, MOOOOrrree

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This needs more

I like the fact that you made it start out the way it did. It gives us a strang but interesting view of the mans background. I would really like to see more of what you can do. Just so you know there are stories on this website that don't have a lot of sex but lots of action. But do try to throw some sex in there. Other than that i would like to see you continue the story but mack the chapters longer please.

Would you please continue the story? I don't even like d&d type stuff BUT this is an exception.

It's rare to find a quality story on this website worth reading, and when you do and find out it's not completed, it's infuriating.

Another Good start to a Story (you opening comments even make us know you HAVE written More) But it just dies in one sad chapter :( Please continue, or if you moved edit the story/your profile/leave a comment to let people know where they can continue!

Hello all, this is the author. I am thinking to start using my account and posting stories again. However looking at this particular tale I don't think a continuation will be in the works. It's just too embarrassing to look at, given how immature I was as a writer.

It would seem that we do not agree author please continue if you feel you did a bad job simply make the next ch. better.

If you really think that its immature or such, make a revised version! Leave this one up for a few weeks after posting the revised so people have a chance to notice and swap over then turn your old idea into what you think it should be with all the needed details and story building! Dont just give up because its from your younger years lol.

If you choose to continue/restart this tale or work on others in the same vein (scifi/fantasy/nonhuman/etc), I will read your work with the greatest interest.

If you need an editor, PM me. No charge. :)