From Our Ashes Ch. 01

Nice start

looking forward to the next installment. Good first post.

good

i would like it longer or have it come out often * * * * *

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good story so far just wish it was longer

good

i hope you keep it up its a very good start

Excellent start however...

I REQUIRE MORE!!! ...If that's not to much trouble...

Please give us (the readers) more very soon.

More...

Please continue.....

more please

MORE

MOre, MOre, MOre, MOOOOrrree

More

This needs more

This is a very interesting way to begin the story.

I like the fact that you made it start out the way it did. It gives us a strang but interesting view of the mans background. I would really like to see more of what you can do. Just so you know there are stories on this website that don't have a lot of sex but lots of action. But do try to throw some sex in there. Other than that i would like to see you continue the story but mack the chapters longer please.

I simple request

Would you please continue the story? I don't even like d&d type stuff BUT this is an exception.

Very Annoying

It's rare to find a quality story on this website worth reading, and when you do and find out it's not completed, it's infuriating.

Very Sad

Another Good start to a Story (you opening comments even make us know you HAVE written More) But it just dies in one sad chapter :( Please continue, or if you moved edit the story/your profile/leave a comment to let people know where they can continue!

I'm coming back!

Hello all, this is the author. I am thinking to start using my account and posting stories again. However looking at this particular tale I don't think a continuation will be in the works. It's just too embarrassing to look at, given how immature I was as a writer.

well...

It would seem that we do not agree author please continue if you feel you did a bad job simply make the next ch. better.

Revised

If you really think that its immature or such, make a revised version! Leave this one up for a few weeks after posting the revised so people have a chance to notice and swap over then turn your old idea into what you think it should be with all the needed details and story building! Dont just give up because its from your younger years lol.

Interesting

If you choose to continue/restart this tale or work on others in the same vein (scifi/fantasy/nonhuman/etc), I will read your work with the greatest interest.

If you need an editor, PM me. No charge. :)