When there are two careless mistakes in the teaser, there's not much chance of actually reading the story.
Sorry for the typo in the title where the word brings is repeated. Hopefully that does not deter readers from the content as I have had some positive feedback on the story.
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When there are two careless mistakes in the teaser, there's not much chance of actually reading the story.
Sorry for the title typo
Sorry for the typo in the title where the word brings is repeated. Hopefully that does not deter readers from the content as I have had some positive feedback on the story.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Bonnie's Beautiful Buns or
More submissions by walterio.