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by Anonymous

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by erectus12302/10/13

nice

lets have some more lines tied in

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by twelveoone02/10/13

as is

5

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by twelveoone02/10/13

and adding

oneiria at times is a perfect example of the less is more approach, otherwise known as economy of words, sometimes known as just
"poetry"
let me say this one more time
just enough, no more
to anybody that chances to read comments

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by Quivering_Quill02/10/13

Just Enough...

Profound imagery with a poetic statement....

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