Office Subordination

Sloppy & Wet, Yet, High & Dry

The story, itself, was well written, henceforth the "3" rating. With that being said, and being, relatively, new to this genre, the story left me "high & dry". That was because of the lack of retribution on the victims part. To me, the same camera, that caught them "goofing off", for lack of a better way of putting it, should have been the same one that gave "jerk off" his comeuppance. Then, again, maybe, that's where the sequel comes in.

@ gotrane
Thanks a lot for commentary.

But, surely, if macho characters in pornography were expected to get punished for fucking, the genre'd end up way too bloody.

Enh. This one left me cold; it would've worked better with a bit of characterisation.