homeAnalOld Friends Become New LoversPublic Comments

All Comments  for

Old Friends Become New Lovers

byMatt450©
All
Comments (2)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Txmanblue6002/21/13

Proofread!

Offered as helpful feedback - A good story theme, but missing and misused words distracted from being able to enjoy it fully. Proofread your work or get someone else to do so for you and your stories will be much more enjoyable. It looked like you used a spell check, but that does not detect missing words or misused words (e.g. "site" instead of "sight"; "sense" instead of "since").

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by greenmountains02/24/13

Edits

Your phrase:
Damn Matt, I have never came like that before.

Better and correct grammar:
Damn Matt, I never came like that before. or
Damn Matt, I have never come like that before.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Old Friends Become New Lovers  or
More submissions by Matt450.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel