All Comments on 'Old Friends Become New Lovers'

Offered as helpful feedback - A good story theme, but missing and misused words distracted from being able to enjoy it fully. Proofread your work or get someone else to do so for you and your stories will be much more enjoyable. It looked like you used a spell check, but that does not detect missing words or misused words (e.g. "site" instead of "sight"; "sense" instead of "since").

Your phrase:

Damn Matt, I have never came like that before.

Better and correct grammar:

Damn Matt, I never came like that before. or

Damn Matt, I have never come like that before.