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twelveooneabout 11 years agostarts nice
refreshing territory
not sure ending in cliche is best move here
5ed
probably saved by preceding
Smoke seems to drift
behind her
HarryHillabout 11 years agoAuthorThis was a post for the 5 senses thread
took so long to write decided to put it here too
SweetOblivionabout 11 years agoNice and precise
A good, tight poem capturing a moment - bravo. Sweet O.
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