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Date Night

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by Anonymous

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by Ashesh902/10/13

An accurate , real-time description of

A date gone wrong ! 5-ed.

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by twelveoone02/10/13

starts nice

refreshing territory
not sure ending in cliche is best move here
5ed
probably saved by preceding
Smoke seems to drift
behind her

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by HarryHill02/11/13

This was a post for the 5 senses thread

took so long to write decided to put it here too

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by SweetOblivion02/11/13

Nice and precise

A good, tight poem capturing a moment - bravo. Sweet O.

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