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by Anonymous02/17/13

Too long

You should break it up into smaller parts. Use chapters.

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by donnylaja02/19/13

re: using chapters

I did use chapters (if you look at the story, you can see I divided it into 72 chapters) but for some reason Literotica posted it all in one lump.

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