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Nakedgirl 01: The Story of Dareen

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by Beatnic_jazzman02/15/13

Chapters

It might have been better if you had split this up into nine separate chapters. It's a bit long to read in one sitting.

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by pheobecharmed02/15/13

Hope there is more. Love the story. Agree could have split it up but still good

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by Anonymous02/16/13

Showed promise for several pages, but towards the end was decidedly not erotic. Disappointing for those who stuck with it to the end.

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by exquis05/23/13

Please continue the story!!! I like where it's going.

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by Anonymous02/21/14

Yes, please continue!

You just can't leave her (and us!) hanging like that...

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