All Comments on 'Jenny Sits on Brother Ch. 01'

... waiting for chapter 2.

way to rushed and no background so no way for anyone but an underage virgin to think it's hot or get off .

I think you did a good job for the first time story. All of us have to start somewhere and almost all of us, are amateur writers so the critics should consideration that when posting a comment. I certainly hope you wite and post more because I personally love brother and sister stories. Thanks for sharing.

RecHiker

It has potential, should you rewrite it but as it is not much of a story. Sex was hot in a cool situation but he turned from in-denial to wannabe-playboy way too fast and if you had to make the sister into a hentai character you should work on how that is understood a bit more.

Hey man, if the issue as most people point out that he was too forward just explain more in the next installment to balance it out. Maybe in this installment he just couldn't control it, but in the next he could feel guilty like an animal. Give us the next installment my friend, great story.

Scotjock1

I thought it was hot. Just the way i like a story. Keep it up!

I liked it it, it has real potential for developement into a proper series, keep it up, and all-knowing Mr. Anonymous can shove his comments up his arse, if he knows so much, why not show us some of it for comparison purposes? Your story works for you, so it's good enough for me, tell it your way and screw them!

thought this might go somewhere but just deflated. not a hater but this is mediocre. try again.

I liked it and hope it is continued

More and like quick please

This is an extremely promising start to possibly longer tale with some more action during the current holidays. I was expecting more pages in chapter 1 as it was getting really hot but was quite disappointed that there was only 1 page to this chapter.... I hope that you will post more and hopefully they would a bit longer cause I surely mean that this promises to be a serious HOTTT incest tale.... :-)

I am waiting for the next part if you like that you can lick my spunk off me any time .LMAO make it sooner, than later, Please!! Thanks for shareing your story with us.

make ch2 this week it awesome

I debated between 4 and 5 star and ended up giving it 5 stars.

This is another great story for an Ass man's fantasy! I would always love to rub my hard dick on a sexy woman's butt!

Indeed!!!! I couldn't agree more..

Why is it called Jenny sits on brother? She doesn't sit on him, they sleep in the same bed. Very misleading for those looking for a specific kind of story

my cousin always use to sit on my face went i was litter she use to come round to my house regular we would go up to my room she wood make me lie down and then she wood sit on my face one time she came round as usual we went up stairs to my room she wanted to watch a DVD she pushed me on the fool and then dragged me to the TV she put a film on and then sit down on my face her bum squash against my face my nosh against her asshole her bum completely covered my face she was wearing lagging and i could see through them she had a pink thong on it was a nice view she got up after the film had gone off and then pulled my pants down and my underpants lifted my legs over my head an started slapping my bum with both hands yelling red bum red bum red bum this was painful eventually she stopped she then took her lagging off and pulled her through down and sit on my face my nosh went rigth up her bumhole she started smacking her bum and told me to sniff up so i sniffed up a few times then she said kiss my bum intel i say stop so i kiss her bum repeatedly eventually she said stop then she sit on my face front ways and pulled her lagging over my head my nosh pressed against her fanny her bum over my mouth i could n breathe eventually she got off her mum yelled up to her its time to go i kissed her bum good by has usual she made me do that then she went every time shed been i never wanted my tea because the taste and smell of her bum wood always be their for the rest of the night

It's called jenny sits on brother cause she does the next day

Please Make a 2nd part

I wish I had a older hot sister and I got to share a sleeping bag with her and dry hump her arse. lucky little bitch he is.

Made me want to hump a pillow hard, I wish I had somebody to hump. Well I had my cousin hump me it was fun and the orgasim was amazing.

I wish I was the sister. I would go on top.

Next time add a grandma

Someone fuck my tight wet pussy👅👅

Well just crawl under the covers with me sweetie, your momma is out of town the rest of the week so daddy is gonna take good care of that sweet, tight, hot, wet pussy and you better keep the astroglide handy because that tiny little ass of yours has been calling me ever since you took up gymnastics. You and your girlfriends running around the house wearing those skin tight outfits, might as well be naked! Then you girls stretching and working out in the living room, all slick with sweat, your tights bunched up in all the right places, your little pussies so soaked with sweat it looks like you've been cumming. I just want to throw you all down, rip those tights off and dive tongue first into your hot little pussies and asses! Watching you girls working out, going out of your way to tease me, constantly twisting, turning and bending while you make sure your goodies are aimed at me and my hard, throbbing cock in my loose shorts.

I'm gonna wear you out tonight sweetie, so you better bring a friend or two home tomorrow to spend the weekend!

Mmm can someone fuck my tight virgin pussy?? Mmm please

trash. even one star would be too good for it.

Thos story was utterly trash and a waste of time.