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by Anonymous02/15/13

I have to be honest I didn't like your story but Im'not going to vote that. What displeased me was the lack of emotions. For example when Dianna was led to the bdsm room ,she pathetically followed the girls because 'she didn't have a choice.' Why didn't she? you didn't explain. You didn't even describe her fear or worries. I m looking forward to the next chapter hoping for these improvements. Keep writing.

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