Great start. I love the interaction but now I need some back story. Why is it so dangerous for them to stay together. Are they weres? Cant wait to read more.
This reminds me just like the movie....
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good start
Great start. I love the interaction but now I need some back story. Why is it so dangerous for them to stay together. Are they weres? Cant wait to read more.
Ummm Hancock?
This reminds me just like the movie....
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