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by Anonymous

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by Ashesh902/20/13

i prefer bitter , black

Coffee as black as my heart ! no cream for me .

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by HarryHill02/20/13

liked

this one... although new poems is getting more boring than usual with the new crop of (illustrated?) poems?

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by Angeline02/20/13

A well-deserved E for the king of coffee poems!

Beautiful work on the illustration, too, with the words melting away into the steam. You are one of very few who imho really understand what an illustrated poem should be, how it should marry words to image so there is an overall effect. But then I believe you own the copyright on the genre. ;)

xo,
Ange

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by SweetOblivion02/20/13

Nice and steamy

A pleasant change of pace - thank you for the artistry. Sweet O.

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by twelveoone02/21/13

not a fan of illustrated

words stand on their own
5ed. if i could vote here
easy

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