by humminbean
A very nice story about a very lucky pair having such a loving and succesful first coupling. Very sensible to use condoms, ignore the moronic remark from the president of the "lets overpopulate the world" and "lets help spread sexually transmitted diseases" societies.
To tell the truth, I enjoyed Anon1's comment. It just made me feel better about the way I try to write. I try to think of each character's point of view, even when writing in one character's first person (and I write from M PoV as often as F), and come up with a story that either participant would like to be part of.
In other words, I want exactly NOT to write a "stick it in her and fuck her til she screams" kind of story, which Anon1 seems to think the only worthy sort. One may hope that, by the time his zits clear up and he has reason to shave more than once a week, he will actually have spent some time talking to a girl - or perhaps will have had someone stick it in him and fuck him til he screams. Whether that happens or not, I'll continue to write for grownups.
I read your story Tampyre and left a comment. I was hoping you'd read my menstrual sex story, since I am looking for comments on it for a research project I'm doing. If you would be so kind, its only 5 pages and can be found at:
http://www.wattpad.com/14598663-the-cottage?d=m
Its about a vampire who takes his menstruating wife to the cottage for a romantic weekend and mixes in a bit of sexual education like you did.
First, your story while short (chapter 2 HINT) it was wonderful. A couple experiencing
love making for the first time.. Two people obviously not just in heat but with great feelings for each other..
Ignore the rabid idiots.. Keep writing
Wish I had caught your first story in time to give it the full count vote it deserved. This outlook was in the same vein and deserved all 5*.
You done it beaut !