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Thanks!
Well.Just the way I like my stories.Long!And it was just perfect.I loved every page of it.Thanks.Love to hear more.Or read actually... :)
Prequel!
Firstly, I have to say - utterly unbelievable... I actually read (to my dismay) The Chaos Blade FIRST! However, reading this in the form of a prequel was a completely enriching experience!!! I'm very very much in awe of the talent you have - actually it's more than a talent. I congratulate you and your companions that helped create this most magnificent epic!! I am actually sending the links of the three "books" to my friend for his birthday! (I have yet to read Yamara, but I have more than enough confidence in the sheer quality it will contain). I must take note of one thing that you did - the snippets of varied unknown heroes in the middle of the large battle was a very classy addition to your writing style!
I'm an honest fan :-) Storm
Ps. feel free to send more works in progress etc. at: sharan.parikh@lemuir.com
I would love to help out in any way or form possible (I'm fairly interested in literature and mythical stories such as these - also very keen to learn from people like you!)
new to me
i can say that i am noy usually drawn to this type of story, but what a revelation. your characters were so interesting. the creatures and the world so detailed. you have a new fan.
Good story
Albeit a grusome one.
I only give it a 4, though, because it was...
Well, for lack of a better word, riddled with spelling and grammatical errors. I recommend getting an editor and resubmitting it. (Although it's gonna be a helluva job for that editor. This sucker is HUGE.)
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