Another Intriguing Installment, Still Building ...
and yet we readers have not a clue where you are driving this bus Susan, you blond vixen. Always capturing spot on impressions and thoughts you have a real talent and continue to hold our riveted interest as you weave your story line. Where oh where are we headed? lol
So many directions and so many paths this story can wander,
I know where I would like it to go, but this is your story and has to be told the way you see fit and I am sure when you get there we will all be both pleased and surprised.
Another enticing chapter that keeps you thinking. Kind of like ice cream, I want more !
Here master storyteller (writer) Susan Jill Parker is almost a teasing mode, dangling thoughts and hints of what's to come from William's voyeuristic tendencies. Somehow I'm guessing the lady across the street has the same name as his now undesirable wife. I'm also guessing the wife has thoughts and maybe a life of her own that we really don't know about. I'm dying to know what Liz is doing in the downstairs of the house and if William is ever brave enough to do anything more than imagine in his 60 want to be 20 year old mind. SJP you are the best, no physical sex but, I'm drooling for more :) The Bird
Where will you lead us, dear lady? As gperry said "so many paths". I do hope you continue with this. Soon.
I don't understand way your scores are so low. The Susan bashers must be out in full force. Why don't the jerks just not read your stories?
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Another Intriguing Installment, Still Building ...
and yet we readers have not a clue where you are driving this bus Susan, you blond vixen. Always capturing spot on impressions and thoughts you have a real talent and continue to hold our riveted interest as you weave your story line. Where oh where are we headed? lol
So many directions and so many paths this story can wander,
I know where I would like it to go, but this is your story and has to be told the way you see fit and I am sure when you get there we will all be both pleased and surprised.
Another enticing chapter that keeps you thinking. Kind of like ice cream, I want more !
Here master storyteller (writer) Susan Jill Parker is almost a teasing mode, dangling thoughts and hints of what's to come from William's voyeuristic tendencies. Somehow I'm guessing the lady across the street has the same name as his now undesirable wife. I'm also guessing the wife has thoughts and maybe a life of her own that we really don't know about. I'm dying to know what Liz is doing in the downstairs of the house and if William is ever brave enough to do anything more than imagine in his 60 want to be 20 year old mind. SJP you are the best, no physical sex but, I'm drooling for more :) The Bird
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Where will you lead us, dear lady? As gperry said "so many paths". I do hope you continue with this. Soon.
I don't understand way your scores are so low. The Susan bashers must be out in full force. Why don't the jerks just not read your stories?
Wow! Susan and Bill
This could really energize my fantasies.
Five star fantasies just like the story.
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