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A Bad Day Ch. 01

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by Anonymous02/17/13

Can't wait for the second Chapter

Nicely written, lovely set-up, love-hate, slowly falling in love with a man who controls her compltely and lights a fire within her she can't control.
As I said, can't wait for the second chapter.

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by Anonymous02/17/13

So far...

Very hot!

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by Anonymous02/17/13

Andi/Kelly?

Why does her name change back and forth? Edit, PLEASE!

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