All Comments on 'A Bad Day Ch. 02'

hot hot hot I am loving the mind-fuck, it's almost like he is a figment of her imagination, her alter-ego, supplying her with what her mind subconsciously needs. Very original, please keep writing, at least for 30 days. ;-)

I need more.

Your writing is very good. The story is hot, and the premise has promise. Keep going, please.

so far you have my interest. I haven't felt blood flowing below my waist in 5+ years but I actually felt a twinge for a moment.. so hurry and get going with the rest

I really hope you haven't decided to drop this. You have a wonderful set up and it would be a shame if you stopped know when this story shows so much promise and was just starting to get really good. Please continue.

Excellent writing, excellent story, pity you didn’t continue.

You did such a great job with this story. Please come back and finish

I enjoyed this. Please continue writing. :)

Aside from the changing name from Andi to Kelly, this story is professing well. I love the interaction and the plot, along with the erotic content, I am looking forward to chapter 3.

BTW, i prefer Kelly over Andi....