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oh wow
hot hot hot I am loving the mind-fuck, it's almost like he is a figment of her imagination, her alter-ego, supplying her with what her mind subconsciously needs. Very original, please keep writing, at least for 30 days. ;-)
This was good
I need more.
More, please
Your writing is very good. The story is hot, and the premise has promise. Keep going, please.
how long before the rest??
so far you have my interest. I haven't felt blood flowing below my waist in 5+ years but I actually felt a twinge for a moment.. so hurry and get going with the rest
Anxiously awaiting the next chapter
I really hope you haven't decided to drop this. You have a wonderful set up and it would be a shame if you stopped know when this story shows so much promise and was just starting to get really good. Please continue.
We want more!
Excellent writing, excellent story, pity you didn’t continue.
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