All Comments on 'Never Left That Bed'

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Quivering_QuillQuivering_Quillabout 11 years ago
No Doubt...

Loved the lines:

You were breathing me out,

While I was breathing you in.

Thanks for sharing your poetic talents...

demure101demure101about 11 years ago
Fuuly agree

with quivering quill...

A lovely poem, this.

HeartnSoleHeartnSoleabout 11 years agoAuthor

Thank you for the lovely comments!

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4ualmost 7 years ago
Poetry

Ooh, I know the feeling

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