All Comments on '30 Love Ch. 02'

Is the best word I can come up with. Very nice story, well written. Thanks.

how about one more stories about what happened on returning to Boston. It is a great story so why not go on with it.

Excellent story but it is a shame to leave it hanging.

I know it is hard to pickup after a long time but I'll bet you have a draft of the ending. Please finish and post it.

sex, a little too little character development and romance. And you kinda left it hanging.

I never saw what he saw in her beyond the obvious.

Nicely done. Let someone else imagine what happened next.

Thank you for sharing!

can be a good thing.

left me wanting more!

Loved this just like your other work. Does feel like it's unfinished though. Hopefully there'll be another chapter to follow.

Couple of things: 1) please get an editor. Quite a few confusing things and errors that an editor could have helped with (I'm happy to help); and 2) you have far too many wiggling eyebrows in your stories ;)

Keep up the good work.

Another great story. Nice twist at the end. As for the length of the story, I enjoy the longer stories.

An amazing story. At first it still seemed a story of erotic couples, but it was moving forward like a real romance. I could not say that a sequel is needed, this ending is so open that it leaves everything to the reader's imagination.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

Any chance a 3rd chapter in this series is available? Want some closure!

I hope there is more to this one.

Love it! I trust there’s going to more...

“Kiss Me Cate” is one of the best on the site. This has the makings to be just as wonderful.

There is a fault somewhere in the posting, chapter 1 and 2 are the same !!!!!!, is there a chapter 3.

To eisteddfa62 I don't see that. Ch. 1 and Ch. 2 are showing up differently for me. As to a chapter 3 that may be in the works. I have several other stories begging to be written too. We will see.

Got to have a chapter 3

Hey, what did happen between them? Chapter 3 anywhere? Thanks!

A good arc on these two chapters, you built it up and capped it nicely. I liked her having to cut her vacation short, it brought their relationship (and the story) to a point, rather than just idling in fun but gratuitous sexy times for another few days.

If you do continue the story, I feel like Chapters 1 and 2 were book 1, and future chapters will be the sequel, their own self-contained story arc.

I can't tell you the number of times I have read this. Thank you! I all good stories you never want it to end, think about extending it like Kiss Me Kate