BTTap if your going to claim to know my views atleast get it right
And I know what story you're referring to, I will ask a again. Did SS06 at anytime use the word "RAPE" in the fucking story? If he did I missed it, because the female lead in the story never, quote "NEVER" said she was raped. So once again, where do you come off taking about my views on rape? If the female didn't claim or say she was raped, then how do you call it rape? You and people like you are why the country is so fucked up now. Your just like the rest of WBC's out there. You want to blame the husband for what the wife did. Look at the wife in this story, according to you Ed should be charged with rape. She was drunk, got fucked and knocked up by Ed. Then why is she yelling "rape"? Oh, that's right it would mess up Ed's marriage, so much for your assanine rape theory.
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Anonymous02/19/13
Wait, what?
This country is fucked up because some people define rape as having sex with someone without their consent? Three things:
1. Some victims of rape don't think of it as rape, because they don't want to acknowledge that they have been victimized in such a base and brutal way.
2. Apparently dictionaries are part of why this country is fucked up (as a terrible speller myself I'm not terribly shocked).
3. Good news everyone! This country is only partly fucked up!
It is rare that a follow-up story is better than the original, but in this case, the 2nd writing is a much better read. DG re-wrote his tale with more drama, tension, even some revenge.
Well done
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Anonymous02/19/13
Not sure why you felt the need to turn it into a cheating story.
Much better the first time around, when it was the husband just leaping to the wrong conclusion and a nice surprise that the wife isn't actually just another cheating slut; this time, and she's just a lying slut like a thousand other lying sluts in a thousand other standard cheating stories. Where's the bang? Why did the alternate story need to be told? Four stars, as opposed to the original five-star.
Quotes from your comments to SS06's story "Missing":
"If you feel you got raped, why wouldn't you say anything. And for damn sure don't act like you want the guy that raped you to keep it from your BF. So called what you want FD45, if she didn't report it, it didn't happen."
"What makes it rape is it being reported."
"I've seen it all, I have never blamed a victim and never will. But like everything else, if you don't report or tell it to someone. It never happened."
You made these statements with respect to a story where a blacked out girl get fucked by multiple frat-boys on one occasion; then gets sex forced on her at a later time by a guy (despite her pleas of "no") and ultimately gives in due to threats of blackmail. I think I represented your position very accurrately, HD. Stand by your convictions.
And, I didn't blame the hubby for the wife cheating in this story; read my comments.
You do entertain me, though.
This ending makes much better sense. The EPT location and disposal were very implausible before! Sweetie screwed up (the second time) by telling Hubby that ANY abortion was planned. She shoulda found a different excuse for being out of town for several days, then mentioned Anna's abortion later (although his knowledge of Anna's BC pills would have left considerable doubt!)
Truth often outs, usually in odd ways!
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Anonymous02/19/13
Good read,but only 1 *
Cause hubbie should of gone nuclear on BOTH the wife and the partner/lover boy, especially since the wife attempted to protect his identity. No respect at all shown for the hubbie. Wife screwed up BIG TIME and says she wants to reconcile, but on HER terms which include protecting her lover. Just imagine living with that. Do these guys that STILL LOVE the ex every realize that they only love what they THOUGHT she was??
First, let me say this to the Anonymous who questioned why this version was made. It was made for two reasons. First, yes, the BTB types like chum in the water. Two...there were a lot of gaping holes in the first version of this story.
She didn't share it with her husband.
Why take the test in Shannon's home?
What actually happened in the Christmas party?
The man, who would be naturally suspicious, would poke and prod, not accept a single assertion by a potential cheater. There were a lot of unanswered questions
Anquiqesophie: I agree with everything you say. Why be proactive and 'fix' yourself AFTER the crisis? Well, that's just human nature. And as I rebutted to this point of yours before: Do you think that the wife didn't ALSO let herself go somewhat? Was she fixing her hair as assiduiously as she did when they were dating? Do you think she gave him unsolicited hummers like they did when they were first married? Why not? Because people's priorites get skewed, men AND women! Why was that Christmas party SO DARNED IMPORTANT that she risks her marriage over it? Why couldn't he take the day off? It's a see saw with no end except that when the crisis comes, people reevaluate their lives and adjust things that have gotten out of kilter.
Dyslexia:
You understand women, but you don't understand men very well. I am only going through what is written, though I am putting a bit of subtext into it. Here is a key ingredient into his character which you are not getting.
This man feels like a failure and he's trying to make up for it.
He disappointed his parents by a) getting a girl pregnant and b) having to drop out of school; his WIFE'S family is buying him a house, and his family providing him housing. HER parents are paying for her education.
Every single time something like that happens, it's like another stroke of a saw blade through his scrotum. Every single time his daughter want's a new dress or he looks at his 12 year old car, while the neighbors have a new one...it's grating.
Men are culturally brought up to be providers. It is his 'role' in life. The only thing I can use for a woman which is similar is a woman being barren. That is emotionally devestating! Luckily, a man can try to work harder, but her getting a job was another big FU to him even though it wasn't meant that way ("Hi honey. You just aren't doing it as a man, so I need to take up your slack...but don't worry...I'll sleep with you less and be hanging around much more successful, educated and interesting people.")
HE DOES NOT WANT TO ONLY SLEEP WITH HIS WIFE ONCE A WEEK! Except for low drive guys, no man does. He sucks it up because he cares about the kids' future more, just like he sucks up the wife working. He WANTS the nicer things in life for her. And we don't know what family dynamics are in play regarding what she wants from him.
Personal example: when I live alone, I live in a small apartment, cook very small and unexciting meals, and play on my computer. When I am with my family, I work around the house, make elaborate meals and try to provide them everything I can.
He is stuck in the situation where to provide, he needs to put in a lot of hours. So it's a moral calculus he needs to make. Maybe he got the equation wrong, but he tried damn hard and needs credit for that.
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As stated by others: she showed a lot more caring about Ed's wife and kids than she did her husband. That would have been the break point for me.
If she really wanted to 'make it up' to her husband, she'd have told her family the truth...or at least SCREAMED at them to defend her husband, not that weak horrible story which made him out to be an insecure piece of shit.
So while I believe she loved her husband, she loved her reputation far more and did very little that I could see to show remorse or make things up to him.
I do read your comments and have read your stories
But reguardless of yours or my personel thoughts. It comes down to the facts. I recently sat in on a court martial. The victim said she was raped 6 times over a 3 day weekend. She said she passed out at least for times over the 3 days. When the attorney asked her why she asked him why what? The attorney asked her when had became a rape. She didn't understand what he was asking? The reason the guy was found not guilty was she was on tape riding him. She was as the pornstars call it "airtight". All holes had a cock in them. It only became a rape when her husband found out. Two of the three guys, sold out and turned on the third guy. They took plea bargins. They are serving 5 years in a military prison. The so called ring leader, the third guy never accused anybody of anything. He walked out a free man.
There are tons of true rape victims that won't report it because they think no one will believe them. Why would they feel that way........hummmm probley because so many people yell rape when there was no rape. Like in the case of SS06 story, three frat boys fuck a drunk woman. But then the next day what was her excuse. Men and women both are all yelling crap about being drunk is no excuse. So this case is some different.....if the so called victim isn't yelling rape then why are you. For that matter why those women who get men drunk, have sex with them then tell them they are pregnant. Then years down the road he finds he was set up. Why don't we charge the woman with fraud?
I was thinking the same thing as I read some of the comments, you make one truthful comment and you're accused of being a feminist slut. At least these men ought to read some of your stories before they accuse you of being a man hater. In my opinion you're more than generous to men in your writing.
I on the other hand expect the kind of responses I receive, men who are misogynic are, for the most part, homophobic. So to them I'm not just a feminist, I'm a man-hating, feminist, slut, bitch dyke. I enjoy raising their blood pressure, for I surely don't want to raise anything else.
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Anonymous02/19/13
I liked it *****
Thanks for writing, DG. tom anon
P.S. Always wanted to be 69th to comment.
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Anonymous02/19/13
Wow
2 things:
1) I liked this story better. And I'll admit, I do have some anger. I like many of the cheating wives stories, though the facts of the story determine whether I am on the BTB or reconciliation side. On this story, each of them has responsibility for creating this mess. Her lie upon lie approach to this mess has me comfortable with his decision. His being sanctimonious about it, however, is unwarranted. I would hope they both could learn from their mistakes and move on in the world wiser than they were before.
2) The chain of comments on this one suggests I may be one of the few men who have commented here who are aware of his anger. It looks like some of us on here should develop other interests.
Thanks for the story, DG.
DP
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Anonymous02/19/13
Jesus!! Its a Work of Fiction People
To argue over this work of fiction is like arguing whether the Road Runner will ever catch the Coyote. Enough name calling etc just plain stupid. Fiction people fiction If you ask me this was not even one of the authors best stories.
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Anonymous02/19/13
Immature skank that treats her family like crap
Many are bothered most cause wife chose NOT to do effective damage control at home; felt her family could get flushed down the toilet. Wife's more concerned with her and her boyfriend's job and family than her own husband's job and her family. After all, the other guy is a big shot and way too important to suffer consequence, and her husband is only blue collar and expendable. Kinda reminds me of high school where your girl dumped you for the upper classman with the car and then got dumped after she served her purpose.
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Anonymous02/19/13
I will never understand the "irreconcilable differences" thing. She fucked and got pregnant by another man and you don't want anyone to know the truth and won't file with adultery! One word for that is WIMP!!!
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Anonymous02/19/13
I liked the other one better because....
It was different following a less common scenario . This one was too much the typical story of a wife making a mistake, hubby finding out, lies, all ending in divorce. Only slightly modified variations.
DG, Must be honest, I feel the original was best, it had a twist in the tale, and a point. This version just feels like the cheating wife, kick em to the curb style that so many stories in this genre embrace, Not your best effort in my opinion.
Cruel Revenge story. However my taste prefers such stories, where the betrayed husband finds the Srcond Chance woman in the epilog.
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Anonymous02/21/13
DG Hear Stories = Wimp/Cuckold Male Characters
.... EVEN when you try to make your "lead" males look tough they still come off as Shemales ...
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Anonymous02/21/13
Another alternate story to the EPT Alternate Story?!
DG,
Shannon's motives and behavior would be much clearer if you added a version of this story from her boss's point of view. What did actually happen in the hotel room? Did Ed or Shannon make the first move? What did Shannon feel and do after Ed had sex with her? Did Ed immediately leave or stay the night? What was their relationship like before that party? How did they react when they saw each other the next time at work? All these details would help the reader determine Shannon's motives and how ashamed she was of her behavior. Then the reader could decide whether she truly deserved a second chance from her husband to atone for her huge mistake.
Btw, let those who have never lied about doing something that embarrassed them or made them ashamed, be the first to kick somebody who lies to the curb.
The dickless assholes who complain that you didn't have the ex wife killed should be ignored. If they had any guts themselves that would at least identify their screennames. I gave it a 5!
I don't believe that Ed Davis didn't know...but he got a 'present' in return !!
Gary did the right thing under very trying circumstances - could YOU (Anon's) have kept your cool enough ?...NO !!!
In the real world,he kept out of jail,kept his job,looked after his kids - but had to STILL put up with a lying cheat of an ex-wife-she still doesn't get it......
Is that he's letting the ex get away with continuing to lie to people about what happened. It's one thing to say "tell people we had irreconcilable differences and leave it at that and so will I," but when she's telling people she never had sex with the guy, that's the time to put his foot down and demand that she come clean or he'll put the whole story out for all to see.
"Oh I won't tell anyone why I divorced her, so that everyone will blame me for leaving my kids"? Bullshit. Tell the world what a slut she is. Honesty is the best policy, they say! Oh, and he should warn Ryan what a conniving and lying bitch his new girlfriend is.
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Anonymous08/23/14
I don't understand
I know about the BTB crowd, and the cuck crowd. However, this site should be where aspiring writers spin tales about "loving wives" and relationships sometimes with cuckoldry, but not about cucks watching, as I think that belongs somewhere else. In spinning a good story, a good ending is presumed. That doesn't mean a good ending for the characters always. Open ends, suggesting further events, often is a good ending. That's suggested here because one must ask the question, "who's unhappy as we leave the story?" She is certainly, he is most likely, and the children are surely hurting. Where does this go? I like to think that I know, but that's my take on the story. What's yours?
Telling the truth about the reason for the divorce...
would have been the thing to do. Right up until the day of divorce when Davis had his mysterious encounter with an unknown assailant. After that, not so much.
Given that Davis was beaten to near death, giving anyone reason to start connecting him to that event would be the most stupid move Gary could make. No, the die was cast at that point, unless Gary truly wanted to have his life irrevocably ruined.
Not that most of these stories are constrained by too much reality, but that's the way it is.
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Anonymous02/22/15
She intentionally went to the party got drunk, danced all over guys, let a guy take her to her room and intentionally fucked him
all because her husband worked instead of coming to her party. Wow, wonder what she would have done if he just stayed home, hired hitmen to kill him? It isn't my fault you made me do it, it isn't my fault I got drunk, it isn't my fault we didn't have protected sex, it isn't my fault I lied to you over and over, it isn't my fault................. Sorry this story isn't finished, how many times in the past was she upset? When is the DNA test of the kids being done? Have we considered the long period of STD and HIV testing? Oh yeah let all, especially her family, believe the divorce is his fault just because he was jealous of an innocent event, makes sense to me, NOT. This woman is a serial liar, nothing she has ever said can be considered the truth or complete. And instead of beating the guy she fucked on company time, the party was a company party, he should have named him in the divorce and sued the company, to not do so actually injures his kids, as that is money that could have been there. Oh he got a divorce but he is a wimp, beat up the guy or not he is a total wimp.
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Anonymous05/19/15
Cheating cunts
When I was a young man, in my early teens, I had a fight with my younger brother. He had an opening and took it and his foot lifted me off the floor as it connect with my testicles. I collapsed to the floor and he ran off to escape my wrath as I lay there and vomited on the floor. I never picked on my brother again.
When I married, it was to a girl I went to school with, she was a year younger than me and was in love with a class mate of hers. She thought they were going to be married when they graduated but he broke up with her, even though he was fucking her regularly before school each day, sometimes after school too. She was in love and anything he wanted was fine. Then he broke up with her and she talked him back into going with her again and a friend told me she was fucking him all day ever day until he finally broke up with her again. Apparently, she thought she could get pregnant and he would be forced to marry her.
Fast forward a couple years and I fell in love with Jodie. Tom had moved away to California and was a thing of her past. We married and I thought we were happy, I know I sure was! Then I got sick, pretty seriously and I won't go into details, but had my sperm level tested only to find out I was sterile. My brothers kick did it, most likely. I was awfully dejected, Jodie and I planned to have a big family, in fact, we'd thrown the birth control pills away almost a year before and had been going at it like bunnies, to no avail. At least I knew what was wrong, we'd have to either adopt or go without.
I felt awful when I got home and Jodie was so excited, I forgot how sad I was. Then she broke out with her news, she was pregnant! Stunned, I fell to my seat on the couch and sat there in shock. How? I didn't say anything about what I found but all I could think of was, who? I was sick to my stomach, my wife had to have been cheating.
My little brother had become a PI after being shot on the job as a County Sheriff. Rather than just sit, he opened his own business after he was on his feet again. After a little talk, he agreed to put his partner who Jodie didn't know to keep an eye on her. He said he'd call when he heard something. In the meantime, Jodie behaved as if nothing was wrong and couldn't understand why I was so quiet, putting it down to become a father jitters.
My brother called me with what I needed. It turned out, Tom had moved back to town and Jodie had finally snagged a baby from him. It didn't sound as if he knew, but he wasn't going to pass up free and nasty pussy. Yes, she was nastier with him than ever with me, sucking on demand, swallowing, ass fucking, flashing, you name it, she did it for him. I took home my pictures and video after stopping at my lawyers office and started the ball rolling.
Jodie was at her folks house when I got home so I drove on over there, taking most of her clothes. I started packing her stuff in and everyone went bugnuts wondering what I was doing, especially Jodie. After I had everything in their living room, I held up my hand and told everyone to shut up. Then I asked Jodie if she knew what was going on. She shook her head no, but was crying and couldn't look me in the eye. I left her a set of pictures but handed them to her dad, who thought she could do no wrong, even assumed she was a virgin on our wedding night. He opened them and then collapsed in his chair. Jodie took them from him and when she saw what they were, she began crying along with her father.
We divorced, even though she told me she'd fight it to the end because we were going to have a baby. It wasn't until my lawyer gave hers a copy of the Doc report saying I was 100% sterile before she gave up.
I saw her a few years later, she was with a Mexican. There was a white baby walking, a black one in the stroller and she was big as a house with another baby. She saw me looking and shaking my head in disgust and couldn't face me. Instead, she turned her head and refused to make eye contact with me.
I married a wonderful young woman who had been deployed to Afghanistan and had lost both legs right below the hips. She still had both arms and hands and got around really well with her wheelchair. We really hit it off and we can usually be seen with her getting a piggy back ride or in her wheelchair with me. Her stubs are so short she wasn't a candidate for prosthetic legs. Her pussy though is right out there in the open and doesn't have enough of a leg stub to close them and hide her pussy. Luckily, she can't get enough sex, she'd sterile from the blast too and we make love constantly.
I do believe that she went to the party in the wrong frame of mind and evidently she is retarded emotionally as well, hope it doesn't pass to the kids. Ed from work wasn't the one to blame for ending his marriage, it was the wife. She is the one responsible for guarding the gate when the husband isn't there. To get mad enough at him to do what she did because he had to work? Wow I hope he doesn't ever forget her birthday or any thing else important to her. He could end up in the emergency room. Good story and of course well written.
Reminded again of that old joke where the wife was pissed at hubby and told him that she must have been stupid when she married him and he said that he guessed that was true but that he was so horny at the time he didn't notice. Might be the summation here.
Second read. The husband did what he had to do. Not only had she cheated, she perpetuated her deed by lying constantly and having her slut friend assist her in the process. She got off with no consequence. Why not tell her boyfriend the lie so he would know the real cunt she was. Also, if he didn't find the tests in the trash he would have had no idea. In this situation the lying, cheating wife would have gotten away with cheating and might possibly do it again, this time with protection. No, she was a cunt all around and it would have been just a matter of time. Fuck.
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Anonymous09/09/16
CHEATING IS STEALING
Define cheating! Liar ,thief ,no regards for anyones feelings but their own ? To put it in a nutshell she did not make a mistake or did something stupid or foolish, she fucked that asshole with the sole purpose of revenge and also to just Fuck him for her own gains? I always believe in second chances! Only once! SO YEAH THE FIRST ONE IS THE BEST! Story is great. Love you all! GREG. OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.
WAS THE MOMENT SHE SAID THAT SHE ADMITTED IT WAS HIM WHO HAD FUCKED HER AND GOT HER PREGNANT...LYING CHEATING WHORE DESERVED TO BE HORSE WHIPPED...HE IS WELL RID OF THE SKANK
English
BTTap if your going to claim to know my views atleast get it right
And I know what story you're referring to, I will ask a again. Did SS06 at anytime use the word "RAPE" in the fucking story? If he did I missed it, because the female lead in the story never, quote "NEVER" said she was raped. So once again, where do you come off taking about my views on rape? If the female didn't claim or say she was raped, then how do you call it rape? You and people like you are why the country is so fucked up now. Your just like the rest of WBC's out there. You want to blame the husband for what the wife did. Look at the wife in this story, according to you Ed should be charged with rape. She was drunk, got fucked and knocked up by Ed. Then why is she yelling "rape"? Oh, that's right it would mess up Ed's marriage, so much for your assanine rape theory.
Wait, what?
This country is fucked up because some people define rape as having sex with someone without their consent? Three things:
1. Some victims of rape don't think of it as rape, because they don't want to acknowledge that they have been victimized in such a base and brutal way.
2. Apparently dictionaries are part of why this country is fucked up (as a terrible speller myself I'm not terribly shocked).
3. Good news everyone! This country is only partly fucked up!
2nd verse, better than the 1st...
It is rare that a follow-up story is better than the original, but in this case, the 2nd writing is a much better read. DG re-wrote his tale with more drama, tension, even some revenge.
Well done
Not sure why you felt the need to turn it into a cheating story.
Much better the first time around, when it was the husband just leaping to the wrong conclusion and a nice surprise that the wife isn't actually just another cheating slut; this time, and she's just a lying slut like a thousand other lying sluts in a thousand other standard cheating stories. Where's the bang? Why did the alternate story need to be told? Four stars, as opposed to the original five-star.
Enjoyed it!
A 5 from SEOhio, good story and ending!
@Huedogg
Quotes from your comments to SS06's story "Missing":
"If you feel you got raped, why wouldn't you say anything. And for damn sure don't act like you want the guy that raped you to keep it from your BF. So called what you want FD45, if she didn't report it, it didn't happen."
"What makes it rape is it being reported."
"I've seen it all, I have never blamed a victim and never will. But like everything else, if you don't report or tell it to someone. It never happened."
You made these statements with respect to a story where a blacked out girl get fucked by multiple frat-boys on one occasion; then gets sex forced on her at a later time by a guy (despite her pleas of "no") and ultimately gives in due to threats of blackmail. I think I represented your position very accurrately, HD. Stand by your convictions.
And, I didn't blame the hubby for the wife cheating in this story; read my comments.
You do entertain me, though.
Yep, better story!
This ending makes much better sense. The EPT location and disposal were very implausible before! Sweetie screwed up (the second time) by telling Hubby that ANY abortion was planned. She shoulda found a different excuse for being out of town for several days, then mentioned Anna's abortion later (although his knowledge of Anna's BC pills would have left considerable doubt!)
Truth often outs, usually in odd ways!
Good read,but only 1 *
Cause hubbie should of gone nuclear on BOTH the wife and the partner/lover boy, especially since the wife attempted to protect his identity. No respect at all shown for the hubbie. Wife screwed up BIG TIME and says she wants to reconcile, but on HER terms which include protecting her lover. Just imagine living with that. Do these guys that STILL LOVE the ex every realize that they only love what they THOUGHT she was??
WOW! So much to comment on!
First, let me say this to the Anonymous who questioned why this version was made. It was made for two reasons. First, yes, the BTB types like chum in the water. Two...there were a lot of gaping holes in the first version of this story.
She didn't share it with her husband.
Why take the test in Shannon's home?
What actually happened in the Christmas party?
The man, who would be naturally suspicious, would poke and prod, not accept a single assertion by a potential cheater. There were a lot of unanswered questions
Anquiqesophie: I agree with everything you say. Why be proactive and 'fix' yourself AFTER the crisis? Well, that's just human nature. And as I rebutted to this point of yours before: Do you think that the wife didn't ALSO let herself go somewhat? Was she fixing her hair as assiduiously as she did when they were dating? Do you think she gave him unsolicited hummers like they did when they were first married? Why not? Because people's priorites get skewed, men AND women! Why was that Christmas party SO DARNED IMPORTANT that she risks her marriage over it? Why couldn't he take the day off? It's a see saw with no end except that when the crisis comes, people reevaluate their lives and adjust things that have gotten out of kilter.
Dyslexia:
You understand women, but you don't understand men very well. I am only going through what is written, though I am putting a bit of subtext into it. Here is a key ingredient into his character which you are not getting.
This man feels like a failure and he's trying to make up for it.
He disappointed his parents by a) getting a girl pregnant and b) having to drop out of school; his WIFE'S family is buying him a house, and his family providing him housing. HER parents are paying for her education.
Every single time something like that happens, it's like another stroke of a saw blade through his scrotum. Every single time his daughter want's a new dress or he looks at his 12 year old car, while the neighbors have a new one...it's grating.
Men are culturally brought up to be providers. It is his 'role' in life. The only thing I can use for a woman which is similar is a woman being barren. That is emotionally devestating! Luckily, a man can try to work harder, but her getting a job was another big FU to him even though it wasn't meant that way ("Hi honey. You just aren't doing it as a man, so I need to take up your slack...but don't worry...I'll sleep with you less and be hanging around much more successful, educated and interesting people.")
HE DOES NOT WANT TO ONLY SLEEP WITH HIS WIFE ONCE A WEEK! Except for low drive guys, no man does. He sucks it up because he cares about the kids' future more, just like he sucks up the wife working. He WANTS the nicer things in life for her. And we don't know what family dynamics are in play regarding what she wants from him.
Personal example: when I live alone, I live in a small apartment, cook very small and unexciting meals, and play on my computer. When I am with my family, I work around the house, make elaborate meals and try to provide them everything I can.
He is stuck in the situation where to provide, he needs to put in a lot of hours. So it's a moral calculus he needs to make. Maybe he got the equation wrong, but he tried damn hard and needs credit for that.
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As stated by others: she showed a lot more caring about Ed's wife and kids than she did her husband. That would have been the break point for me.
If she really wanted to 'make it up' to her husband, she'd have told her family the truth...or at least SCREAMED at them to defend her husband, not that weak horrible story which made him out to be an insecure piece of shit.
So while I believe she loved her husband, she loved her reputation far more and did very little that I could see to show remorse or make things up to him.
I agree with njlauren
I've been in brothels in Bangkok three sheets to the wind and almost puking drunk.
I had been celibate for MONTHS (not my wife's fault. Work) Tempted? You bet your sweet aunt's fanny!
I STILL knew enough to say 'no'. Now...maybe I just hadn't drunk enough (6 drinks in three hours? More?) but having been almost falling down drunk,
Hmm...I did drunkenly hit on a cops fiance...so I GUESS it's possible...but I'm not a big believer in the 'drunk' excuse.
I do read your comments and have read your stories
But reguardless of yours or my personel thoughts. It comes down to the facts. I recently sat in on a court martial. The victim said she was raped 6 times over a 3 day weekend. She said she passed out at least for times over the 3 days. When the attorney asked her why she asked him why what? The attorney asked her when had became a rape. She didn't understand what he was asking? The reason the guy was found not guilty was she was on tape riding him. She was as the pornstars call it "airtight". All holes had a cock in them. It only became a rape when her husband found out. Two of the three guys, sold out and turned on the third guy. They took plea bargins. They are serving 5 years in a military prison. The so called ring leader, the third guy never accused anybody of anything. He walked out a free man.
There are tons of true rape victims that won't report it because they think no one will believe them. Why would they feel that way........hummmm probley because so many people yell rape when there was no rape. Like in the case of SS06 story, three frat boys fuck a drunk woman. But then the next day what was her excuse. Men and women both are all yelling crap about being drunk is no excuse. So this case is some different.....if the so called victim isn't yelling rape then why are you. For that matter why those women who get men drunk, have sex with them then tell them they are pregnant. Then years down the road he finds he was set up. Why don't we charge the woman with fraud?
isn't it funny...
isn't it funny how some people get so obsessed with me that they call me a cunt even over arguments i never made? now who has an agenda here?
It's not really so funny!
angiquesophie
I was thinking the same thing as I read some of the comments, you make one truthful comment and you're accused of being a feminist slut. At least these men ought to read some of your stories before they accuse you of being a man hater. In my opinion you're more than generous to men in your writing.
I on the other hand expect the kind of responses I receive, men who are misogynic are, for the most part, homophobic. So to them I'm not just a feminist, I'm a man-hating, feminist, slut, bitch dyke. I enjoy raising their blood pressure, for I surely don't want to raise anything else.
I liked it *****
Thanks for writing, DG. tom anon
P.S. Always wanted to be 69th to comment.
Wow
2 things:
1) I liked this story better. And I'll admit, I do have some anger. I like many of the cheating wives stories, though the facts of the story determine whether I am on the BTB or reconciliation side. On this story, each of them has responsibility for creating this mess. Her lie upon lie approach to this mess has me comfortable with his decision. His being sanctimonious about it, however, is unwarranted. I would hope they both could learn from their mistakes and move on in the world wiser than they were before.
2) The chain of comments on this one suggests I may be one of the few men who have commented here who are aware of his anger. It looks like some of us on here should develop other interests.
Thanks for the story, DG.
DP
Jesus!! Its a Work of Fiction People
To argue over this work of fiction is like arguing whether the Road Runner will ever catch the Coyote. Enough name calling etc just plain stupid. Fiction people fiction If you ask me this was not even one of the authors best stories.
Immature skank that treats her family like crap
Many are bothered most cause wife chose NOT to do effective damage control at home; felt her family could get flushed down the toilet. Wife's more concerned with her and her boyfriend's job and family than her own husband's job and her family. After all, the other guy is a big shot and way too important to suffer consequence, and her husband is only blue collar and expendable. Kinda reminds me of high school where your girl dumped you for the upper classman with the car and then got dumped after she served her purpose.
I will never understand the "irreconcilable differences" thing. She fucked and got pregnant by another man and you don't want anyone to know the truth and won't file with adultery! One word for that is WIMP!!!
I liked the other one better because....
It was different following a less common scenario . This one was too much the typical story of a wife making a mistake, hubby finding out, lies, all ending in divorce. Only slightly modified variations.
The original was best.
DG, Must be honest, I feel the original was best, it had a twist in the tale, and a point. This version just feels like the cheating wife, kick em to the curb style that so many stories in this genre embrace, Not your best effort in my opinion.
Naturaly 5 stars.
Cruel Revenge story. However my taste prefers such stories, where the betrayed husband finds the Srcond Chance woman in the epilog.
DG Hear Stories = Wimp/Cuckold Male Characters
.... EVEN when you try to make your "lead" males look tough they still come off as Shemales ...
Another alternate story to the EPT Alternate Story?!
DG,
Shannon's motives and behavior would be much clearer if you added a version of this story from her boss's point of view. What did actually happen in the hotel room? Did Ed or Shannon make the first move? What did Shannon feel and do after Ed had sex with her? Did Ed immediately leave or stay the night? What was their relationship like before that party? How did they react when they saw each other the next time at work? All these details would help the reader determine Shannon's motives and how ashamed she was of her behavior. Then the reader could decide whether she truly deserved a second chance from her husband to atone for her huge mistake.
Btw, let those who have never lied about doing something that embarrassed them or made them ashamed, be the first to kick somebody who lies to the curb.
It's**
A read. Sometimes we should leave well enough alone!!
Ignore asshole anonymous cokmments
The dickless assholes who complain that you didn't have the ex wife killed should be ignored. If they had any guts themselves that would at least identify their screennames. I gave it a 5!
5 Stars from me.
I don't believe that Ed Davis didn't know...but he got a 'present' in return !!
Gary did the right thing under very trying circumstances - could YOU (Anon's) have kept your cool enough ?...NO !!!
In the real world,he kept out of jail,kept his job,looked after his kids - but had to STILL put up with a lying cheat of an ex-wife-she still doesn't get it......
Ah OK then here is the part 1 for the part 2 LOL
So it was saved to the wrong opening story -
You should have them move Part 2 over to here lol - avoid confusion heh.
They all still work for those who want them to.
My only objection to his handling
Is that he's letting the ex get away with continuing to lie to people about what happened. It's one thing to say "tell people we had irreconcilable differences and leave it at that and so will I," but when she's telling people she never had sex with the guy, that's the time to put his foot down and demand that she come clean or he'll put the whole story out for all to see.
The Truth
He should have told the sister to ask again, and if she didn't get the truth he would tell her.
Why always
"Oh I won't tell anyone why I divorced her, so that everyone will blame me for leaving my kids"? Bullshit. Tell the world what a slut she is. Honesty is the best policy, they say! Oh, and he should warn Ryan what a conniving and lying bitch his new girlfriend is.
I don't understand
I know about the BTB crowd, and the cuck crowd. However, this site should be where aspiring writers spin tales about "loving wives" and relationships sometimes with cuckoldry, but not about cucks watching, as I think that belongs somewhere else. In spinning a good story, a good ending is presumed. That doesn't mean a good ending for the characters always. Open ends, suggesting further events, often is a good ending. That's suggested here because one must ask the question, "who's unhappy as we leave the story?" She is certainly, he is most likely, and the children are surely hurting. Where does this go? I like to think that I know, but that's my take on the story. What's yours?
Telling the truth about the reason for the divorce...
would have been the thing to do. Right up until the day of divorce when Davis had his mysterious encounter with an unknown assailant. After that, not so much.
Given that Davis was beaten to near death, giving anyone reason to start connecting him to that event would be the most stupid move Gary could make. No, the die was cast at that point, unless Gary truly wanted to have his life irrevocably ruined.
Not that most of these stories are constrained by too much reality, but that's the way it is.
She intentionally went to the party got drunk, danced all over guys, let a guy take her to her room and intentionally fucked him
all because her husband worked instead of coming to her party. Wow, wonder what she would have done if he just stayed home, hired hitmen to kill him? It isn't my fault you made me do it, it isn't my fault I got drunk, it isn't my fault we didn't have protected sex, it isn't my fault I lied to you over and over, it isn't my fault................. Sorry this story isn't finished, how many times in the past was she upset? When is the DNA test of the kids being done? Have we considered the long period of STD and HIV testing? Oh yeah let all, especially her family, believe the divorce is his fault just because he was jealous of an innocent event, makes sense to me, NOT. This woman is a serial liar, nothing she has ever said can be considered the truth or complete. And instead of beating the guy she fucked on company time, the party was a company party, he should have named him in the divorce and sued the company, to not do so actually injures his kids, as that is money that could have been there. Oh he got a divorce but he is a wimp, beat up the guy or not he is a total wimp.
Cheating cunts
When I was a young man, in my early teens, I had a fight with my younger brother. He had an opening and took it and his foot lifted me off the floor as it connect with my testicles. I collapsed to the floor and he ran off to escape my wrath as I lay there and vomited on the floor. I never picked on my brother again.
When I married, it was to a girl I went to school with, she was a year younger than me and was in love with a class mate of hers. She thought they were going to be married when they graduated but he broke up with her, even though he was fucking her regularly before school each day, sometimes after school too. She was in love and anything he wanted was fine. Then he broke up with her and she talked him back into going with her again and a friend told me she was fucking him all day ever day until he finally broke up with her again. Apparently, she thought she could get pregnant and he would be forced to marry her.
Fast forward a couple years and I fell in love with Jodie. Tom had moved away to California and was a thing of her past. We married and I thought we were happy, I know I sure was! Then I got sick, pretty seriously and I won't go into details, but had my sperm level tested only to find out I was sterile. My brothers kick did it, most likely. I was awfully dejected, Jodie and I planned to have a big family, in fact, we'd thrown the birth control pills away almost a year before and had been going at it like bunnies, to no avail. At least I knew what was wrong, we'd have to either adopt or go without.
I felt awful when I got home and Jodie was so excited, I forgot how sad I was. Then she broke out with her news, she was pregnant! Stunned, I fell to my seat on the couch and sat there in shock. How? I didn't say anything about what I found but all I could think of was, who? I was sick to my stomach, my wife had to have been cheating.
My little brother had become a PI after being shot on the job as a County Sheriff. Rather than just sit, he opened his own business after he was on his feet again. After a little talk, he agreed to put his partner who Jodie didn't know to keep an eye on her. He said he'd call when he heard something. In the meantime, Jodie behaved as if nothing was wrong and couldn't understand why I was so quiet, putting it down to become a father jitters.
My brother called me with what I needed. It turned out, Tom had moved back to town and Jodie had finally snagged a baby from him. It didn't sound as if he knew, but he wasn't going to pass up free and nasty pussy. Yes, she was nastier with him than ever with me, sucking on demand, swallowing, ass fucking, flashing, you name it, she did it for him. I took home my pictures and video after stopping at my lawyers office and started the ball rolling.
Jodie was at her folks house when I got home so I drove on over there, taking most of her clothes. I started packing her stuff in and everyone went bugnuts wondering what I was doing, especially Jodie. After I had everything in their living room, I held up my hand and told everyone to shut up. Then I asked Jodie if she knew what was going on. She shook her head no, but was crying and couldn't look me in the eye. I left her a set of pictures but handed them to her dad, who thought she could do no wrong, even assumed she was a virgin on our wedding night. He opened them and then collapsed in his chair. Jodie took them from him and when she saw what they were, she began crying along with her father.
We divorced, even though she told me she'd fight it to the end because we were going to have a baby. It wasn't until my lawyer gave hers a copy of the Doc report saying I was 100% sterile before she gave up.
I saw her a few years later, she was with a Mexican. There was a white baby walking, a black one in the stroller and she was big as a house with another baby. She saw me looking and shaking my head in disgust and couldn't face me. Instead, she turned her head and refused to make eye contact with me.
I married a wonderful young woman who had been deployed to Afghanistan and had lost both legs right below the hips. She still had both arms and hands and got around really well with her wheelchair. We really hit it off and we can usually be seen with her getting a piggy back ride or in her wheelchair with me. Her stubs are so short she wasn't a candidate for prosthetic legs. Her pussy though is right out there in the open and doesn't have enough of a leg stub to close them and hide her pussy. Luckily, she can't get enough sex, she'd sterile from the blast too and we make love constantly.
Better Than The Original
But he still should have told the family about what she did, and rather than beat Davis he should have sued him and broken up HIS marriage!
Not necessarily better than the original
But more in keeping with the evidence established there. The whole pregnancy test thing in the first one just didn't seem to ring true.
Second time through...
Like this one better.
Good treatment of the subject.
I do believe that she went to the party in the wrong frame of mind and evidently she is retarded emotionally as well, hope it doesn't pass to the kids. Ed from work wasn't the one to blame for ending his marriage, it was the wife. She is the one responsible for guarding the gate when the husband isn't there. To get mad enough at him to do what she did because he had to work? Wow I hope he doesn't ever forget her birthday or any thing else important to her. He could end up in the emergency room. Good story and of course well written.
Reminded again of that old joke where the wife was pissed at hubby and told him that she must have been stupid when she married him and he said that he guessed that was true but that he was so horny at the time he didn't notice. Might be the summation here.
Damn
Second read. The husband did what he had to do. Not only had she cheated, she perpetuated her deed by lying constantly and having her slut friend assist her in the process. She got off with no consequence. Why not tell her boyfriend the lie so he would know the real cunt she was. Also, if he didn't find the tests in the trash he would have had no idea. In this situation the lying, cheating wife would have gotten away with cheating and might possibly do it again, this time with protection. No, she was a cunt all around and it would have been just a matter of time. Fuck.
CHEATING IS STEALING
Define cheating! Liar ,thief ,no regards for anyones feelings but their own ? To put it in a nutshell she did not make a mistake or did something stupid or foolish, she fucked that asshole with the sole purpose of revenge and also to just Fuck him for her own gains? I always believe in second chances! Only once! SO YEAH THE FIRST ONE IS THE BEST! Story is great. Love you all! GREG. OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.
TESTS.....THE BANE OF OUR LIVES
especially when the blues appear, TK U MLJ LV NV
GOSH GARY HOW DID YOU FIND OUT
WAS THE MOMENT SHE SAID THAT SHE ADMITTED IT WAS HIM WHO HAD FUCKED HER AND GOT HER PREGNANT...LYING CHEATING WHORE DESERVED TO BE HORSE WHIPPED...HE IS WELL RID OF THE SKANK
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