Mom's a Tease Ch. 02

HOT

Dang, that was hot and very exciting!

hmmm

I guess I can see what you're trying to accomplish by having your characters go through mental debates. And I can appreciate it, as it adds a depth most writers on here cannot accomplish. However, it seems out of place. One minute the mother is dominate (ie making him dress in panties and calling him girlfriend) the next minute she doesnt know if she can give him a hand job?? I dont know if those two contradicting mindsets can coexist. Another example of the contradiction would be the fact that she let him masturbate her. But somehow masturbating him was too much to handle? Dont get me wrong, I understand incestual thoughts can lead to mental turmoil. I just dont think its realistic that she goes from one extreme to the other. (ie one minute shes making him her panty boy. Next minute she cant handle a handhob). Anyways, I've never been much of a storyteller so feel free to ignore my 2 cents. You are a talented writer and I enjoy your stories. Just didnt understand that logic. Please continue writing more stories.

Best wishes,
Sean

@hummm

maybe it wasnt the hand job that sent her running could have been the fact that she just came in her sons mouth ....just My 2 cents on that ....either way I hope theres another chapter of this story

Bravo!

You are doing an excellent job of weaving this story line. Love the explorations of mom's inner conflicts. Obviously a highly sexed woman with a new awakening of her son's sexual attractiveness, with her lack of a sexual outlet for some time, it makes this tale almost believable ... almost. lol

I do wish there were less references to "mommy" and that perhaps the son could grow a set & take control, but that's my thoughts not yours.

Anticipating the next installment with cock in hand ...

YES MA MA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Much better then chapter 01:. I hope chapter 03: is forth coming. This was a much better read , thanks..............LAROC OF AGES

Part 3.

Paul needs to go upstairs & take control of her ass. Good work lets see more.

Great Start

I am looking forward to seeing where this story goes next.

More, more, more, more ..............

Agreed with the rest. Could not wait for the next chapter. Well done.

Well Written

A story of your desire for your son or a history of your first time to have sex with him? You want to feel that young, throbbing cock fucking you, his first pussy is his mothers.

WTF happened????? oy vay!

this story started out really good.... not sure WTF happened between 1 and 2 ...... but what a shit pile it turned into!!!

Yummy

Story is coming along nicely. I like how she is the dominating the situation. Looking forward to next chapter.

Don't stop there, There is a lot more to this story. It may take a while, but his mother has to get over her guilt and start again.

Good story

Great first two installements please keep it going

Mixed Reviews

I got a lot of mixed reviews for this story. Sorry if I disappointed anyone. The internal turmoil of Mom is something I thought we could all relate to. Sometimes a situation is very erotic, and then you climax or are startled, and you take in the situation for all that is abnormal about it. Often this causes guilt. Maybe the story is too disjointed since I write different sections at different times, not sure. Thanks for the feedback, I am trying hard to improve my storytelling.

Keep going!

I cannot see anything wrong with the first part certainly. I do not write stories myself but as a reader I really enjoyed your way of writing it. Including the son and moms thought processes too was a great addition. I cant wait for part 3!

Chapter 3 is on its way

Thanks for all the feedback. I am still trying to figure out this whole erotica writing experience.

A New Fan

Great story. Like the Mom's confliction. Keep going.

dynamite work

I loved your tale its very good and the whole switching pov is great concept loved it and I have so far read over a thousand stories from this genre it was hot and an amazing story please feel free to continue

could use some editing, but good story. I liked that it didn't peak too soon

even hotter

mommy is out of control lust has taken over...so hot.....now get those bad thoughts out of your head and finish this off......so hard....

my son

i have seen my son's hard cock and always wanted to suck and fuck with him. when i came reading this story i asked him to read it with me while we read i saw his cock bulge an touched it....that was it, we sucked, licked and fucked all night. he sucked cunt so good.

Great Comment Anonymous

Hope you had a great night of fun!!!

So Many Emotions!

Nicely written story. For the detractors who say the mom's emotions are contradictory, they are, after all, emotions!

Emotions are not logical or reasonable which is why it can be very self-destructive to allow your emotions to overrule your principles and common sense.

The way you've developed your characters, mom is a strong and dominating (or is it domineering) woman whose sexual frustration has suddenly become overly stimulated by the recognition of her nearly adult son's manhood.

The son being shy and reserved almost to the point of being a recluse is still his mother's son and that boundary of parental authority still stands strong for him. While he is seeing his mom as a very sexually desirable woman, he has not gotten past the fact that she is his mom.

Considering the dynamics at play, I would expect that in this situation, mom must be the force driving the final barrier crossing.

this is a terrific story!

I wonder why it is that ladies write the best stories of mothers and sons messing around. Ms. SS's contribution is very well written and emotionally nuanced. The description of the mother covered by her boy Paul's semen is priceless. I hope that Paul gets to shoot another big load of his semen in a more confined space, a nice warm wet place, where it really belongs. (Guess where.) I also loved the comment from the mother who wrote "my son." This wonderful woman does what many, many moms would love to do but don't because they're still too inhibited, too tied up by old outmoded social restrictions. She spreads her legs and gives her son the best gift any mother can--his own damn birth canal, his own mother's cunt. She welcomes her boy up between her legs, up the same hole he came out of, and she does it over and over again. With that incestuous couple, her son's big cock is up his own mother's twat more than it's just hanging down over his balls. By now he must have unloaded those balls of his and shot gallons of creamy sperm up where he was once a baby. All of us here heartily congratulate you. We are in awe of you, Ma'am and wish you and your son many more years of hot and happy motherfucking.

Really hot but somewhat fast. Hopefully chapter 3 will be more in depth.

great

love it

Brilliant

I love how you take this story, mom is obviously conflicted about the whole experience and I can see how each action might effect her differently. His masturbation of her was, in her mind something harmless, a teaching experience she called it and she'd already had an orgasm or two, then that night with time to think, she was allowing the wine to go beyond what she initially wanted to do, tease him. Then carried away by her lust and the evil drink, she allowed him to eat her, yet she did not take his issue in her mouth. So I can understand the conflict and how it might seem odd to some, but to me it does not. Kind of like someone trying something new taking two steps forward and one back, never sure but unable to resist. I look forward to the next Chapter.