by edharian
This is getting better and better each chapter, can't wait for the next one
edharian ,this is a very good story I am really enjoying reading it keep it up I did ! adding you to my favorite list! again two thumbs up !!!
Great writing and use of description. Hell of a story. Would love to see this continued.
Love the camping/cartrip scenario very much, and this coupled with surreptious, sneaky sex acts with the siblings, is simply perfect. Very enjoyable read. Doesn't need more chapters, maybe one or two with skinny dipping or a bear attack, ha ha. The light humourfull tone compliments the story, as well as the beautifull love scene. Please write more stories like that, and thanks for that one.
three and four should have been ch. 02
other than that, a good story. annoying to have to keep starting and starting again, and again. but still good.
wow this is one awesome story I wish sex would make veary thing better in life. but I have loved the story and I hope you wright more like it I love long storys more some time when well written and so far this one is a 10 in my score ,and I have not even finnshed yet good job you have a gift thanks for shareing it and your storys with all of us now that I read these storys I rarely go to x sights thanks . Number one story in my book so far as favrerit to .
Are they trying to make up for years of fighting and bickering all in one day??! Lol! Hey, why not! We all remember that period of time when we were mid- late teens and could go 3-4 times a day, every day and not even think we were doing anything out of the ordinary, because everyone else could pretty much do the same. Now as I age and age, if One happens, it’s drop the ball in Times Square and celebrate! How things have changed.
Aww that end was cute. I love stories about siblings being romantic, the sex is nice too, but to me it's the bonding and becoming a couple that's the best.
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