All Comments on 'My BFF Jenny'

Badly written and just silly...

"He shuttered..." should be, "He shuddered..."

While the story itself is plausible to a point there are many plot and stylistic problems. I doubt a male would answer a door in a corset and stockings to a random person at the door during a physical engagement with another person. The quick way in which he enjoyed his friends company implies either a physical only relationship or a lack of caring about others.

The story itself had possibilities in creating a three way relationship, but much more development of the situation should have occurred.

To the person that said a man opened the door... Read the story again. To the writer, good read I liked it. Check your spelling though!

Crap