All Comments on 'Jenny Sits on Brother Ch. 02'

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amodelmanamodelmanabout 11 years ago
Wow

Wow, that was great. Can't wait until the next instalment.

billyjim55billyjim55about 11 years ago

Yup, its not bad, but how about making the chapter a few pages long or at least a very full single pg. Maybe if the next chapter has as few words then possibly combine 3-4 and just submit it as it looks chapter 2 would have still showed in new paragraph near 2/3rds down page., regardless, I still liked the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Five Stars!!!

You really stepped it up a notch with this chapter, it was freaking hot!!! I loved the ass sniffing!!! Would really like to see some analingus and more descriptive language concerning the the scent of her ass. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!! Thanks for sharing.

dinkymacdinkymacabout 11 years ago
Great!

Thanks for sharing.

RigatonyRigatonyabout 11 years ago
longer chapters please

I love the story, but it seems you are rushing it too much. Please slow the pace a little and make the chapters longer.

Thanks for the good story, Rigatony :/)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
don't rush

build the story don't rush its good and could be great. lengthen it and i hope mum and dad get involved. looking forward to more. cheers.

shooter72shooter72about 11 years ago
Wonderful Continuation

Spot on.... I think you could have played it out just a tad bit longer.... But even though it was short but I blew my load along with the brother..... Super HOTTT.... :P

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

I love this. ..

PrinceLukePrinceLukeabout 8 years ago
more storyline

I know u want this as a purely sexual story but if u had added In just 10 percent more of a storyline this would be a really good read, currently its only jerk of material.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Horny af

Man I am so horny I wish I had somebody to hump who would hump me

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
😍😍horny👅

Somebody please hump me!! Lick my big tits. Finger me. Do what ever you want with me!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Horny

o hall ya

this gets me mad horny I wish I had a sister like that

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Awww, damn Horny Girl, you're almost a year away from me:(. Oh for a time traveling teleport machine! Hehehe!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Horny

You still can fuck my tight wet virgin pussy. And suck my big tits. Do you have snapchat??

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
hmm

If you both enjoyed that, ok..... You could ask her to pee in your mouth.... like the end scene.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

You are f*king genius! Waiting for more

bshell47bshell47about 2 years ago

Better

Can’t wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very hot story

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

@cliffb26 Just shut the F up. No one asked for your dogmatic views. I like Fuji apples because they are sweeter but my taste buds isn't the only ones that matter. Gala apples might be sweeter to some but I not going to say they are wrong. I just don't eat Gala apples instead of trying to change ones experience. In no way the rules say descriptive writing only.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Really 🔥. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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