Yup, its not bad, but how about making the chapter a few pages long or at least a very full single pg. Maybe if the next chapter has as few words then possibly combine 3-4 and just submit it as it looks chapter 2 would have still showed in new paragraph near 2/3rds down page., regardless, I still liked the story.
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Anonymous02/21/13
Five Stars!!!
You really stepped it up a notch with this chapter, it was freaking hot!!! I loved the ass sniffing!!! Would really like to see some analingus and more descriptive language concerning the the scent of her ass. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!! Thanks for sharing.
I love the story, but it seems you are rushing it too much. Please slow the pace a little and make the chapters longer.
Thanks for the good story, Rigatony :/)
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Anonymous02/21/13
don't rush
build the story don't rush its good and could be great. lengthen it and i hope mum and dad get involved. looking forward to more. cheers.
Spot on.... I think you could have played it out just a tad bit longer.... But even though it was short but I blew my load along with the brother..... Super HOTTT.... :P
I know u want this as a purely sexual story but if u had added In just 10 percent more of a storyline this would be a really good read, currently its only jerk of material.
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Anonymous07/30/16
Horny af
Man I am so horny I wish I had somebody to hump who would hump me
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Anonymous12/10/16
😍😍horny👅
Somebody please hump me!! Lick my big tits. Finger me. Do what ever you want with me!!
Wow
Wow, that was great. Can't wait until the next instalment.
Yup, its not bad, but how about making the chapter a few pages long or at least a very full single pg. Maybe if the next chapter has as few words then possibly combine 3-4 and just submit it as it looks chapter 2 would have still showed in new paragraph near 2/3rds down page., regardless, I still liked the story.
Five Stars!!!
You really stepped it up a notch with this chapter, it was freaking hot!!! I loved the ass sniffing!!! Would really like to see some analingus and more descriptive language concerning the the scent of her ass. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!! Thanks for sharing.
Great!
Thanks for sharing.
longer chapters please
I love the story, but it seems you are rushing it too much. Please slow the pace a little and make the chapters longer.
Thanks for the good story, Rigatony :/)
don't rush
build the story don't rush its good and could be great. lengthen it and i hope mum and dad get involved. looking forward to more. cheers.
Wonderful Continuation
Spot on.... I think you could have played it out just a tad bit longer.... But even though it was short but I blew my load along with the brother..... Super HOTTT.... :P
I love this. ..
more storyline
I know u want this as a purely sexual story but if u had added In just 10 percent more of a storyline this would be a really good read, currently its only jerk of material.
Horny af
Man I am so horny I wish I had somebody to hump who would hump me
😍😍horny👅
Somebody please hump me!! Lick my big tits. Finger me. Do what ever you want with me!!
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