All Comments on 'After Dinner Treat Ch. 01'

Congratulations on becoming an author- I really enjoyed it!

I like your way with words ... very effective!

Well written.....great job!

GREAT!

It was short, sweet, and to the point. I enjoy a good story, but a mound of dailogue for little pay off isnt my thing. Good story, good writing, and i finished lol.

Thank you!! Chapter 2 is in the works

A very engrossing story...Suzanne has captured her lust for her Aunt and Uncle quite nicely. A few more details would have been nice and the grammar could have been cleaned up, but the theme of the story was very salacious. I look forward to the further adventures that I'm sure will ensue.

you have a real gift for the erotic...hard all the time....mmmmm

My comment above is a very high compliment in the Australian vernacular.

I did enjoy your work.

Howdy, now about that chapter 2! Would love to see it....

Loved it. Left me so horny I would literally fuck anyone right now

I looked for the second part but there is no second... pleas make one... I'm dripping cum...