It was short, sweet, and to the point. I enjoy a good story, but a mound of dailogue for little pay off isnt my thing. Good story, good writing, and i finished lol.
A very engrossing story...Suzanne has captured her lust for her Aunt and Uncle quite nicely. A few more details would have been nice and the grammar could have been cleaned up, but the theme of the story was very salacious. I look forward to the further adventures that I'm sure will ensue.
English
Naughty, sensual, sexy- I love it!
Congratulations on becoming an author- I really enjoyed it!
Kept your promise
I like your way with words ... very effective!
Well written.....great job!
It sure was
GREAT!
Very nice
It was short, sweet, and to the point. I enjoy a good story, but a mound of dailogue for little pay off isnt my thing. Good story, good writing, and i finished lol.
Thank you!! Chapter 2 is in the works
An Aunt and Uncle's Fantasy
A very engrossing story...Suzanne has captured her lust for her Aunt and Uncle quite nicely. A few more details would have been nice and the grammar could have been cleaned up, but the theme of the story was very salacious. I look forward to the further adventures that I'm sure will ensue.
awesome
you have a real gift for the erotic...hard all the time....mmmmm
Bloody well done.
My comment above is a very high compliment in the Australian vernacular.
I did enjoy your work.
Chapter 2
Howdy, now about that chapter 2! Would love to see it....
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