All Comments on 'The One Called Mercy Ch. 01'

by RedHairedandFriendly

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JagFarlaneJagFarlaneabout 11 years ago
Really enjoyed it

Looking forwards to chapter 2!

MistressTrinityJonesMistressTrinityJonesabout 11 years ago
Great!

Really enjoyed this and look forward to the next installments. I can see why you fell in love with Mercy and wanted to return to her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Very well written ...

but I can’t say I really enjoyed the story. I will say I truly believe there are women who crave this kind of treatment. I’m glad I’m not one of them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

So very tired of 'oh gosh! I really DO love it when the psycho hurts me! Oh I AM a slut!' It's lazy author wanking material. The premiss is good. The characters have the potential to be interesting and complex. Yet here you are shoving them off the easy cliff. I will try another chapter and hope it becomes more.

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