Loved the story and can relate even more so. Just haven't met the aliens yet; and my blushing bride of 45 years ensures we stay on the honeymoon and never have an argument (only have very loud discussions though). Keep on writing and waiting for your next ending.
Really enjoyed this - what great characters you created. I like them and their romance quite a bit. I now plan on reading more of your stories - thanks!
English
Great Stuff, nice flow & dialogue, but ...
... I find the ending a bit abrupt. Thanks for writing !
Aliens? Seriously?!?
Read this story and Medic. Both are great character driven romps, but please leave the aliens to Sci-fi genre. Keep writing!
.A bit odd
A great story, not to erotic, more of a documentary. Can easily relate to the age but not the ending. Aliens? C'mon!
OMG
Loved the story and can relate even more so. Just haven't met the aliens yet; and my blushing bride of 45 years ensures we stay on the honeymoon and never have an argument (only have very loud discussions though). Keep on writing and waiting for your next ending.
Nice erotics
and a even some sence of humor. Thanks!
What a great story.
Really enjoyed this - what great characters you created. I like them and their romance quite a bit. I now plan on reading more of your stories - thanks!
Good one!
More good stuff from the 'Felicity Files'.
All you folks commenting about Aliens and
such, should read 'Peers'.
Nice
I really enjoyed the tale. No drama, no tension and no unlikable characters. I believe I will visit this genre more often. Thanks.
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