All Comments on 'Mother in Law Cannot Resist'

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x_witless_xx_witless_xabout 11 years ago
I'm gonna give you 4*

Cos you didn't call the fat dried up slutty cunt a "bitch" once in this story. I get so bored of the "suck it, bitch" bullshit.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveabout 11 years ago
Crap

You fuck your girlfriends mother and she asks you not to cum in her you do anyway? What a jerkoff.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggabout 11 years ago
Wrong, wrong, wrong ( but hot, hot, hot ) !

37 is just about the time a woman who takes care of herself begins to enter her prime. If you mix in three years of undesired celibacy for her, a troubled marriage and a 20 year old,self confident bordering on cocky, male boarder with an eye for beauty ?

You don't need a biology degree to know nature is primed to take a very primal course . This author didn't take the suave and sophisticated path to reach his goal. He didn't need to. Enough said.

katyontimekatyontimeabout 11 years ago
VERY NICE SEXY STORY

Very sexy story,everyone had a great juicy sexy time.Enjoyment for all is what matters when we have sex.Thanks for the story.

labigqlabigqabout 11 years ago
good start

I hope there's a part 2

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 11 years ago
Nicely done

I hope to see more of him giving his girlfriends mother a lot of cock.

Thanks for the read.

chytownchytownabout 11 years ago
Good Read***

Thanks for sharing. You had a 5 until the bastard would not pull out when she ask him to. That's just rude!!!!!!!

mojorisin1967mojorisin1967about 11 years ago
Interesting. cantbuymy applaudes

a story with a guy not pulling out when he is asked for. In some countries this is rape. If a husband would be bashed even slightly his commentary would be full of his usual hate.

DunaDunaabout 11 years ago
Good idea for revenge story authors

I will use similar idea in my 6th story plan with such turn, that the divorce planed husband will use to do enemy relation between this daughter and his (ex)wife. Modern technic (video.............).

DunaDunaabout 11 years ago
Patent claim for useing

I ask for the more revenge story Authors not to use the mother in law fucking revenge idea for their next stories I want to ask patent for it.

DunaDunaabout 11 years ago
Only modern technic and science

I got such feedback, why I did peace in the last chapter with the exwife and the daughter. I could use this for a long lasting hate and anger building with never seen gradchildren for the exwife.

R M RoxingerR M Roxingerabout 11 years ago
Make Fiona Pregnant!

I would like to see the guy make Fiona pregnant, either in a follow-up to this story or otherwise in a story featuring her. Keep up the hot writing, in any case!

DunaDunaalmost 11 years ago
Thank you for the idea

I published my Revenge Story version from the idea of this story on SOL. The title is "The Two Wimps".

DunaDunaalmost 11 years ago
SOL

SOL=storiesonline.net

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
it was good till

it turned into a rude and inconsiderate relationship. but, I should have known what to expect from the author's user name MILowner. owner being the give away.

imready2imready2over 9 years ago
enjoyable

I cant disagree with rightbank but it is MILowner's story. It was enjoyble and looking forward to reading more.

bartermanbartermanover 8 years ago
from 5 to zero

I too was loving the story 'til he refused her request so it's a zero

akeyesxakeyesxover 7 years ago
I agree with others...

It was great until he forced her to take his load in her pussy. Even a perv has limits.

droopy dogdroopy dogover 7 years ago
Critics

Come on all you writer critics! It's a fucking fantasy site filled with fantasy stories!

People write these stories to get everyone and themselves horny. It amazes me how NOBODY found it wrong that he was fucking his girlfriends mom, just what a jerk he was when he shot his load in her! What a bunch of fucking hypocrites..

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Mother in Law

A mother in law is the mother of your wife NOT your girlfriend

zwyrblzwyrblalmost 7 years ago
right order

This probably ist the worst structured story I came across here on this site. I worked myself through and might spare you some work. This ist the order in which these stories should be read and which should be anounced by the author himself on top of each story as he's not capabale or not willing to enumerate them in a sensible way:

01) Mother in Law Cannot Resist

02) Mother in Law Submits Again

03) Mother in Law Takes More

04) Fiona, Eager to Please

05) Mother in Law, More Like Whore

06) Fiona Willingly Becomes My Whore

07) Fiona's Work Life Changes

08) Fiona the Deal Facilitator

09) Fiona's Celebration Dinner

10) Fiona Gets Called In To School

11) Fiona Tells Her Story

12) Fiona It's Time Alan Knew

13) Alice Moves Back In

14) Alice's Blackmail Begins

15) Alice Accepts The Terms

16) Mum! You Whore

That's where I stopped as there's little new after the first chapters. Lots of repetitions. Nice to a certain extent, but way too little development for my taste. My advice: better don't read them all in a row.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

I have read all of the Fiona/Alice stories in order now, and I am enthralled with Fiona. She has inspired me through many enjoyable wanks.

If you find the beginning slow, give it a chance, I suggest you invest the time to read the tales in order so you get the most enjoyment.

I’m going back to Deal Facilitator section now to assure nice dreams tonight

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Pretty low

Another piece of shit trying to be erotic with off the wall story.

BlackProfBlackProfalmost 4 years ago
From a Pretty Good Story to Bigoted Trash, Instantly

The whole story, which wasn’t otherwise poorly told, was ruined by unnecessary bigotry. Jap’s eye? So unnecessary. It turned what might have been a decent story into trash instantly.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Wifey?

Mother-in-law, ok. But the wife? For a mother in law, a daughter is needeed (mention of an underage one)?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

You don't fill a pussy with cum after you've been asked NOT TO.......ASSHOLE

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Not mother-in-law only girl friend's mother. Not married.

Generous average

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

fantastic read with great flow.

juanviejojuanviejo5 months ago

Cinco Estrellas!

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