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Cuckoldry, Spirituality, Family:
Forget what the other writers said. Bring on the next chapter. I find your story to be very erotic! I, myself, am impotent due to radiation treatments. I know I will never be able to sexually satisfy my wife again. I have told her to find someone that she finds attractive and physically fit, younger (we are in our '60's)than she, and take him on as a lover. I would willingly accept that and would like to watch them have sex. But if she preferred, they could do it solo and she could fill me in on the details afterward. We have discussed this several times, but have not yet acted on it. Hope to soon.
keep trying
my wife and i love black cock, esp she does and i try to help her get all she wants so i want to hear about this episode
Keep writing, please
Ignore the mean "anonymous" types. We love the stories, even if it is because we are cucks!
5 *
Like it so far, it gets a 5*!
nice start sounds really interesting
Good Start
We hope you don't wait too long to continue.
Judging by the comments already posted
You are another thin skinned cuckold author that deletes any critical posts. I have read all of your chapters so far but decided to comment on this one out of all of them. Why you ask? Because it is always interesting to see how an unstable mind without self respect starts his stories that is why. Your main character seems to actually be a real man in this one but oh how looks can be deceiving. Having read the rest of your chapters he is a masochist and enjoys what is happening to him even if he breaks too many rules and ends up dead by Faisal's hand with his wife sneering over his corpse. he will die with a smile on his face because he realizes that he can no longer be a man at all and is better off dead. I do hope that is how you plan to end this story good sir. Either that or maybe have her divorce him and take him for every penny he has and leave him a broken man on the street living from a cardboard box which would also be an acceptable outcome.
with warmest regards,
John
Good start
This was a very good start. I really liked how you developed the characters. Hope to read some more.
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