All Comments on 'Dream Vividly and Fantasize Wildly'

by Quivering_Quill

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erectus123erectus123about 11 years ago
getting better all the time

nice rhymes as "sway-cache" --

Now, "wanton" seems to be one of your favorite words and here you are using it creatively as in "wanton brain" where it is a modifier or an adjective, take a look at the internet dictionary definition. I think what you are going for is the noun meaning "she was promiscuous or she was wanton" so you might let this word lie outside your poetry except when used correctly. Of course if you are fucking her on a table in a chinese restaurant it might be appropriate (a little joke, forgive me).

Take a look at the definitions below from internet dicks:

wan·ton

/ˈwäntn/

Adjective

(of a cruel or violent action) Deliberate and unprovoked.

Noun

A sexually immodest or promiscuous woman.

Verb

Play; frolic.

Synonyms

gambol - play

More info - Dictionary.com - Answers.com - Merriam-Webster - The Free Dictionary

Wanton - Definition and More from the Free Merriam-Webster ...

www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/wanton

b : having no just foundation or provocation : malicious . 4. : being without check or limitation: as. a : luxuriantly rank ...

Anyway, hope this is helpful, you are full of piss and vinegar and obviously other fluids as well--keep it up!

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