A Caged Bird Sings Ch. 03

Awesome

Next you should include a train in which a whole heap of trannies have their cock in the one in front

I really think it is awesome that she found love with Prisha. This is an excellent series. Thank you for your hard work!

your regular piece of feedback

great story, great story
sex scenes were as good as always, with old favorites coming back like ass licking, playing with cum, some water sports. very hot :)
i know i haven't really said it in the past but you really do have a great character development in your stories. i suppose i haven't really noticed it so much in the past or didn't pay that much attention to it, but that really is great of you.
also liked how Odessa en Prisha got together. not exactly how i imagined it in the first place, but it was really nice :) the tension before the kiss...
those 2 were kinda like certain characters in your favorite cartoon/anime series, they're not together yet, but basically everybody knows they fit together perfectly and in the end they do so.

keep up the good work :) i'll try to do the same

amazing every bit of it

I just loved it the sex is intense the character development thorough all in all worth the 5 stars I gave it

please god

please God i want more this story was amazing and fuck!!!!

Too hot for prison!

The last chapter you write HAS to be a prison break, followed by a brief epilogue of our quartets new Happily-Ever-After life in a warm, tropical South American paradise (the kind that lacks extradition).

Prison is no place for 4 super hot hotties! ;3

best thing i've read on literotica

loving this series so far! cut right in to chapter two but had to go back to the beginning to get filled in. i envy your writing style it is simply fantastic and this story is one of my favourite erotic reads online, ever! and i've read a lot!

character development is brilliant, i really love the prisha character. chapter three was easily the best so far - greatly looking forward to chapter 4

thanks again for such a brilliant and sexy/dirty/filthy story

Amazing

Loving this story so far, you must make a chapter 4! I can't wait any longer!

I'm not to fond about the piss.

It does make sense with the prison setting. But come on, that's disgusting. I'm not going to favor this chapter because of this. I did like the ending thou and I do look forward to chapter 4. But please no more piss.

my favorite story!

please give us a part 4! your writing is amazing and incredibly sexy!

Wonderful, wonderful story!

This is an amazing story, and one of the best I've read on this site! I can't wait for the next chapters!

Chapter 4 please!!!

Love the hell out of this story. I wish it were a published novel, so that I could finish it at my own leasure. This is truely a fabulous read. I've been waiting on that chapter 4, for some months now. Drop that soon for us. Chants, "Chapter 4!!! Chapter 4!!! Chapter 4!!!"
Lol.

YES MORE please!

Would love to read about a nice anal creampie licking! ( a suggestion for chap. 4)

Sorry just wondering if there is a fourth chapter coming out, would love to read more.
Great story btw really love it

The next one please

I love the way this is put down. I would love to read another few chapters please come back to this I will keep in touch with the page of your stories and keep looking for the next one.

Excellent !

This was my first adventure into this type of story and I am HOOKED on this one.
catphan8 probably put in better than I could have , so I'll leave it there .
The love and camaraderie in this story is wonderful . Then you introduced the love of the two charter pushed it over the top . Your writing style is easy on the eyes and easily followed . Thanks . 5*****s not an easy feat in this story but you carried it off. Waiting for more chapters to follow this .

Thanks again

Tx Cracker

Great Stuff

Not much to say, I loved the story and would like to see it continued.

Mostly posting here because you said support to an individual story makes it likelier it will be continued, I gave my general view of your writing in the Bible Thumper story (title of the comment was Love It, I think).

If you like detailed, constructive criticism then let me (and everyone) know and I will try and give you the best review I can. I don't always do that because some authors just like praise, it feeds their creative drive and that is cool. I as an author prefer constructive criticism and I find it much more useful than simple (possibly overstated) praise. But an author of free stories deserves to choose what kind of feedback he or she gets, so some input from you on what you want to hear from us, would be good.

Random Love

Well well well, as a reader of your other stories I must say, I really do appreciate the emotion and well being that your characters develop near the end. Especially in Glory beyond the Hole. Keep up the good work, looking forwards to another segment :D

Please don't stop now

This is a very convincing and just plain REAL world you've created. I hope to see more of this beautifully described group of people.

Genius!

This is beautifully written! So much detail and character development. This isn't just a sexual story, but an actual series of stories. You are quite the author and I cannot wait for chapter 4.

Get next chapters loved this series

I hope there are more chapters otw! These were great

MORE!

I love how this is actually a series of stories and not only sex stories. I love all the detail that you add. I read the whole series without looking up from my phone. I can't wait till chapter 4!

Garbage

Enough said

Amazing

Enough Said!!!!

Patience😢

Patiently!!! Waiting for the rest, although when I looked at the release dates I saw that chapter 3 was back in sometime in 2013. So I fear their will be no more releases. 😢😢

Absolutely Beautiful

I know this was written a while ago, but I'm really hoping you continue this story! It's beautifully written, and I want to see where you take this. You're a talented writer!

Excellent !

This is not my usual type of reading , but you write it so well that you put the reader in that place I could almost taste the nasty food in the mess , the feel of soft towel , etc. This is a great read . PleAse continue .5 $tars.

Please come back!

I've read this story and "a big side effect" and it really leaves me empty thinking that this story won't continue. If you ever come back, and I pray to god you do, PLEASE continue this story! I love the way you write and I appreciate all the hard work you put into these. This story must continue if I want to be sane. Please come back!