Very romantic. Wish it had a bit more tension.
I'm not sure what type of tension Mr. Chapman wants. Too often 'tension' just means ugliness in this catagory. This was a wonderful scene between loving partners who want just that. Thank you and I would read more.
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Very romantic. Wish it had a bit more tension.
just fine as it is
I'm not sure what type of tension Mr. Chapman wants. Too often 'tension' just means ugliness in this catagory. This was a wonderful scene between loving partners who want just that. Thank you and I would read more.
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