with 'Indian.' Very poor effort.
If you are serious this was really bad. No chapter 2 is needed
Hey, this is a good start. I would love to hear how pooja gets subjugated. Please continue writing. This is great platform you have built.
I voted for your effort. Keep up the writing irrespective of what anyone thinks or write about you.. best wishes and lots of love.
looking forward to read more...please dont put ur self in the place of cockhold... in ur next part
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I think we should replace the word 'cuckold'
with 'Indian.' Very poor effort.
This is a Joke Right?
If you are serious this was really bad. No chapter 2 is needed
Hey good job
Hey,
this is a good start. I would love to hear how pooja gets subjugated. Please continue writing.
This is great platform you have built.
keep it up!!
I voted for your effort. Keep up the writing irrespective of what anyone thinks or write about you..
best wishes and lots of love.
Good start
looking forward to read more...please dont put ur self in the place of cockhold...
in ur next part
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