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Pooja: My Wife Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by ythebadger02/21/13

I think we should replace the word 'cuckold'

with 'Indian.' Very poor effort.

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by Zed5602/21/13

This is a Joke Right?

If you are serious this was really bad. No chapter 2 is needed

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by Anonymous02/21/13

Hey good job

Hey,

this is a good start. I would love to hear how pooja gets subjugated. Please continue writing.

This is great platform you have built.

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by samsin02/22/13

keep it up!!

I voted for your effort. Keep up the writing irrespective of what anyone thinks or write about you..

best wishes and lots of love.

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by luvbirds05/06/13

Good start

looking forward to read more...please dont put ur self in the place of cockhold...
in ur next part

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