All Comments on 'Sweet Valentine'

Sweet , vanilla , puppydog boyfriend who is offset by a hard , cruel Dom both focussd on tge same girl who is secretly a painslut !! 5-ed .

for this well written psychological mini thriller. Does the sex excite the Dom or is it exciting because he is "ruining" hangdog's sweetheart, who obviously needs to be "ruined". Loving does not always give the object of one's affection what they need.

"I'll be stripping your sweetheart. She's one who is keen to be used." is a powerful line, as forceful as a rape, scary. Were it not for the comment of future roses arriving one fears for the subs safety. In conclusion, the poem is extremely well written and pulls the reader into it's story line with no distraction, so we are left to discuss content and not form.-5

I agree that your story line is well crafted and pulls the reader into the sensual and sexual images. Excellent imagery and content. Thanks for sharing