All Comments on 'After The Date'

lol I didn't see that coming. Good twist.

I loved the ending.

That was awesome!

I liked the surprise!

Excellent!!!

Great ending! Wouldn't the world be nicer if it always ended like this, when needed :-)

I'm pretty sure I wasn't supposed to laugh hysterically at the ending but it was brilliant and I didn't see it coming!

I did not see the end coming at all. You had my attention then it was good for a laugh.

Thanks for the twist!

Haha that was an unexpected twist... good show

I was really liking your story until the end. I was hoping they'd get married later.

You did that SO well. Congrats to the max.

... I thought it was a stroke story. I was wrong. Nice twist ending. Panther Fan.

I was SO hoping he wouldn't get away with it!! Thanks!!

He so deserved that! lol Best ending!

As a woman who loves nonconsent stories this fell flat liked some of your other ones though. This whether you are a man or woman felt like a cheap pop.

love it!

Nice twist :) I like your since of humor.

hahaahahahahaha

Finally the victim prevails, yesssss!

I LOVED this ending! Beautifully done.

Perfect

Brilliant!

Best one yet!!!

Long time reader, first time commenter.... This is awesome. Love it. 😂

I enjoyed it too much I came twice

At first, while reading this, I thought it was going to be a story of rape, of which I do not approve. The author has neatly converted the story into a parable encouraging morality. Full marks!

I liked this one, I laughed so hard at the end.