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lol I didn't see that coming. Good twist.
Great Story
I loved the ending.
Awesome
That was awesome!
surprise
I liked the surprise!
LMFAO
Excellent!!!
Alright!
Great ending! Wouldn't the world be nicer if it always ended like this, when needed :-)
LoL
I'm pretty sure I wasn't supposed to laugh hysterically at the ending but it was brilliant and I didn't see it coming!
Did not see that coming!
I did not see the end coming at all. You had my attention then it was good for a laugh.
Thanks for the twist!
much deserved
Haha that was an unexpected twist... good show
Liked everything but the end
I was really liking your story until the end. I was hoping they'd get married later.
Ripper!
You did that SO well. Congrats to the max.
I gave it 5 stars...
... I thought it was a stroke story. I was wrong. Nice twist ending. Panther Fan.
Perfect ending for the smarmy prick!!
I was SO hoping he wouldn't get away with it!! Thanks!!
He so deserved that! lol Best ending!
flat
As a woman who loves nonconsent stories this fell flat liked some of your other ones though. This whether you are a man or woman felt like a cheap pop.
lol
love it!
Nice twist :) I like your since of humor.
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