All Comments on 'Island Girls Ch. 03'

That was so wonderful

You have described the event with a sharp focus. Wonderful writing. Simply awesome.

Thanks for your kudos. I'm terribly sorry about the gap when Chapter 3 was missing. That was the fault of the Literotica submission reviewer, who took the Chapters out of sequence and posted Ch 4 before Ch 3. To say I was annoyed is putting it as nicely as I can.

Again thanks!