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by Quivering_Quill

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Ashesh9Ashesh9about 11 years ago
Q_Q , excellently done : a witty , sarcastic Fable :

this could have been penned by my good friend Erectus , ur style , words , penmanship seem eerily so familiar of Erectus's touch !!

erectus123erectus123about 11 years ago
a bit of an homage to Edgar?(your tap tap)

Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered weak and weary,

Over many a quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore,

While I nodded, nearly napping, suddenly there came a tapping,

As of some one gently rapping, rapping at my chamber door.

`'Tis some visitor,' I muttered, `tapping at my chamber door -

Only this, and nothing more.'..

check rules for limericks on wiki --I

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"It's actually a tad more complex than many poem structures.

Here are the basics:

5 lines.

Rhyme structure is AABBA (lines 1,2 and 5 rhyme, and 3 & 4 rhyme with each other. Their "beat" is di di dum di di dum di di dum

Lines 1, 2, and 5 generally have seven to ten syllables, while lines 3 and 4 have only five to seven syllables. Their beat is di di dum di di di dum.[First published in 1845]

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Ideally, it should be about a humorous or clever story/observation/statement, with the last line carrying the real "zinger" that makes it truly funny. "

Let me off you this example--

There once was a man from Nantucket

Whose mission in life was to fuck it

When he courted a girl

He'd reach for her curls

And if he can't fuck it

He sucks it"

What my dear friend Ashesh refers to is a poem about missionaries knocking at the door, I think it was called "Constant Banging"

best regards, keep scribbling!

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