I Came Screaming Last Night

Pretty good apart from being a 'wonton' woman! Ha!

Great!

Yeah, a few minor spelling errors, as the other user pointed out. But what a great story! Not too much world building, but still a great sense of the characters. I like that you use "Mister", it's what I call my guy too! :D

I also like that it's clearly a couple in the midst of discovery. Not first time anal, but there is still exploring to do. Looking forward to more work!

Nice Story

Nice story, and I liked your slight references to the fact that she is not a woman with a perfect body, Made it more real for real women like me. I can relate. Keep writing.

sexi storyby joshualinley

this was the most fucking,sexiest story after i read it i want to have vaginal sex anal sex and last but not least oral sex with my penis down somegirl's throat

Loved everything but the last line.

Really enjoyable

I agree with a previous commenter about your hint that this woman was not cover model beautiful, it struck a cord for me as well. As a plus size woman who relates heavily to this story I really enjoyed this read. I also appreciate the pleasure/pain ratio not being exaggerated.