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by Quivering_Quill02/18/13

Somebody's getting lucky....and,

I hope his feet are clean.....nothing worse than toe jam to spoil the mood.... Unless, he has the worth that few possess.... Thanks for sharing....

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by erectus12302/20/13

so how much is he worth?

don't think that is best line here, no need to repeat it, a little more detail might make poem more exciting, describe his monster cock, how it felt up your ass, did you lube? if so say so, and add a conclusion, i.e/"I rode his cock till my head hit the ceiling/ I fell reeling/ I'd lost the feeling/then Teddy jumped on top/ he didn't want to stop/what's a bottom going to do/when his lover isn't through?....."

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