by kokshur
I hope his feet are clean.....nothing worse than toe jam to spoil the mood.... Unless, he has the worth that few possess.... Thanks for sharing....
don't think that is best line here, no need to repeat it, a little more detail might make poem more exciting, describe his monster cock, how it felt up your ass, did you lube? if so say so, and add a conclusion, i.e/"I rode his cock till my head hit the ceiling/ I fell reeling/ I'd lost the feeling/then Teddy jumped on top/ he didn't want to stop/what's a bottom going to do/when his lover isn't through?....."