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Strawberry in the winter

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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone02/19/13

Interesting

this is where you want to go
Whispers on my tongue
Hint of season to come
it begins to say something wonderful
4ed

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by MKvDeepSea02/21/13

Simple and elegant

This was simple and elegant, like a strawberry... or love.

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by Anonymous04/24/13

*****

I would shorten the title by leaving 'the' out, but I think this was an excellent first effort.

Five.

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