Sometimes

5*

jeez. That made me shiver and tear up. That's a poem to love, if ever there was one.

Nice

Tribute to a happy and wonderful life. We should all be so lucky.

WOW!

Very, very nice.

Thanks!

You Truly Have a Talent

What a great flash story. Look forward to your next offering. Thanks for reminding us what true life/love is all about

Agrede w/mattblack

This could easily have (also, NOT a quibble) been submitted as Erotic Poetry. VERY nice, and hot!

Saying so much by saying less. But expressing it at the exact, perfect isolated moment In time.

Nice trick. Very nice in fact.

Hmmm...

Nicely Done and Thanks...My sweetie and I really liked this...many parallels to our own life...I swear it gave me goosebumps and that other thing also!...Sweetie liked it a LOT>and of course so did I. !!! :-)

sad

so sad when a long time, loving mate passes. only the memories are left. i have seen it too often over the last 10 years. one day soon it will be me or my mate that only has the memories of a lilfe time.THANK YOU

No fair..

...making me cry

That was very touching.

Really nice writing and emotions.

I agree it was very well written by female author from a female perspective

I imagine as the author wrote this she had troubles with boundaries for her characters and a couple of times it almost got away. What almost got away wss the strong undercureent of selfless love between the two. Thankfully it didn't.

very well done. not a LW story though - she was a REAL LW! 5.

WOW!

That says it all.

Excellent

Extremely well written and very emotional, well done!

Wow!

After many years of sitting in the weeds on this web site, this story motivated me to finally register. This is one of top five stories I have read in all those years. I don't know what more I could say.

Well Done!

Romantic and erotic. I like the conditions on the book. A truly loving wife. Five stars!

That was absolutely beautiful

Not a word wasted, not a word out of place. The sheer simplicity of it made it perfect - a wonderful declaration of what true love can, and should, be. Congratulations on the best posting I've read on here for a very, very long time.

:)

A sweet tender well written TLW! How refreshing.

Thank you!!!! 5*****

M1

That was good

Glad to see that there is true feelings to a story. I love a great sex story but a story with some emotion is great. Well done.

Brava

Thanks for this wonderful little poetic tale. You said so much with so little...beautifully.

You certainly got 5* from me...

I only wish I could give you more. Simply done and very touching; I loved it. More like this...please!

Sometimes

FORGOT to have a photo book of his body which honored you?

Damn..

Read it twice. Both times I wanted to go back and read it yet again. Damn good read and well worth a five.

Beautiful Work...

The words turn into feelings...

Tears

I have tears, not for the sadness, but for the fullness and sweetness. Thank you so much.

Great!!

A great true loving wives, but the best part is, no Navy Seals were cuckolded or mentioned. A normal man and his woman. Ahhhhh!

Oh!!! NO

Show them that book. Think of all the love that was bound up in taking them and both of you sharing them through the years. And it may help them, if they read your stories, to understand his prostituting you for his business.

Very nicely done

Sweet but sad.

Gave me a lump in my throat and tears in my eyes, knowing that all of us are going to lose our loved ones eventually.

Thanks for the good read.

Beautiful Read

When I first opened this story file, I quickly gave up on it. Not much of a real story, I thought to myself. So I closed the file.

But within 15 minutes I came back to give it another look. Yes, it wasn't like a real story.

But that's what made it so special. It lovingly summed up a long term marriage with just one-line comments & filling up only one page of paper.

After reading it twice, I started to think about my own marriage of 47 years & wondering what I would like to write about.

Jeff Jones

Now, that is creative writing

Unconventional for lit., that's for sure. Way past the bar room story telling style we mostly get here. She loves her man, that strongly comes through.

Just read this again for the umpteenth time

And I loved it again for the umpteenth time. Thank you for writing it, and hen sharing it!

Enjoyed it

Thanks.

excellent

I have lived this and I am LIVING this now.... I see her in my mind, I feel her in my body, I know she lives in my heart, I will love her forever and ever and ever

Love, lasting love.

now that is true love

Your details and teasing is what love between a wife and husband should always strive for. Thanks for sharing it

touched .......

really.....:)

wonderful memories

CH, you have written the essence of a lifetime of love,

I am now going to go through the photos and memorabilia
of the twenty-five years I had with my wife.

My memories of her are what sustain me now in my declining years.

Superb

beautiful story.

Writing is Terrible, Try drawing

UNO ESTRELLA

Thoroughly inept and talentless garbage !

Real bad this. "1*" bad.

A REVIEW OF A DIARY

and memories of times long gone. TK U MLJ LV NV

truly wonderful

A love prose-poem. Beautifully done, even got the meter right.

You could have this on your phone, and show it to new acquaintances. Anyone worth knowing would love it; steer clear of the rest.

Pile of mindless and talentless garbage ! "1*" !!

Nuff.

Choppy...

...nothing but one-sentence paragraphs

Difficult to read.

Super

Written just like someone remembering the past.